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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2021 08:11 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

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Reviewer: Vitamin-D Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2010 06:36 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea

Loved it. It moved me. Thank you.

Reviewer: nepats2oo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2008 10:14 am Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

So wonderful and lovely and cute and adorable... If only it had happened this way on my television screen instead of my computer screen. *sigh*

Reviewer: nepats2oo5 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2008 10:14 am Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

So wonderful and lovely and cute and adorable... If only it had happened this way on my television screeb instead of my computer screen. *sigh*

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 10:51 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

That was a beautiful ending.  And I've made those brownies - with Symphony bars.  And they are delicious.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 10:48 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

"I guess the most important questions are did you really mean it, and do you still feel the same?"

I loved his reply. Thank heavens there was no Karen or anyone else in the way. And this line was so sweet:

"She smiled at the screen, wondering if the wings of the butterflies in her stomach would ever get tired from all that flying around they were doing in there.

 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 10:40 pm Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note

"Six months ago, his dreams became a reality, and he didn't even know it."

That was either hopefully sad or sadly hopeful, and I hope the hopeful wins out.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 10:34 pm Title: Rescue Me Before I Fall Into Despair

I lost track of this after the first chapter but luckily found it tonight.  This was so beautifully sad:

"She kept her e-mail open all day long while at work, and her stomach would flip every time she saw a new message. But the wave of disappointment that came over her when she realized it wasn't from Jim was strong enough to make her feel a little sick. After a week and a half of no response, she decided that for her own health, she just had to accept the fact that things were really over between the two of them."

 

Reviewer: hoosier Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 09:44 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea

Where are you Puffing Noise?  I think this was becoming my new favorite story.  What happens now?

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

*happy sigh* That was such a sweet story. =)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

Awww, I loved Jim's impatience and multiple emails...and Pam getting all emotion over hearing from him again. So very sweet. And realizing that they both want to be more than friends. Yay!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:44 pm Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note

Six months???? Oh wow, cannot even begin to imagine what Pam must be thinking...

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Rescue Me Before I Fall Into Despair

Aww, I loved Pam's realization that she loves Jim. Oh my, it's never a good idea to be near electronics when you're drunk...lol

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea

I've always wondered what Pam did on Jim's last day. Really interesting start, so heartbreaking.

Reviewer: House Calls Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 06:57 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

Awwww!  So fluffy!  So sweet!  I could *so* see Pam falling off the couch while making out with Jim.  ;-)  And props to Pam for telling Jim he just didn't give her enough time figure everything out. 

 And I'm feeling the urge to listen to The Police . . . hmmm . . .



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the part with Pam falling off the couch while kissing Jim, and the conversation they had about the past. Thanks for reading! And go on and listen to The Police. hee.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea

I wish this didn't have to end.  I really loved it. 

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 04:16 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 04:10 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

adorable!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 03:34 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea

It's not over is it?

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:27 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

So sweet.  I'm sad it's over : (

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life


"So you'll be home soon."

"Yeah, I will."
I can't even describe how excited I was when I read this line! There was a nice little cheer section in my head yelling "Go to Scranton!", and then he did! lol. This chapter was excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you appreciated that line. I had changed Jim's line there in my last revision, so I'm glad it was appreciated! Pam is thinking he's going to his home in Stamford, and Jim knows she thinks that but is thinking of his real home in Scranton with Pam. :o) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 02:00 pm Title: Love Can Mend Your Life

Love it! can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! That was the last chapter, though,

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 07:03 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

OMGOMGOMG!!!! Yay!

I can totally hear Jim's voice cracking, and Pam laughing out loud that Connecticut sucks.  

Please update soon.  Soon like how Jim sends emails, not like how he replied to the first one. 



Author's Response: hehehe, thanks so much!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

Awww, great turn of events in this one! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 03:38 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore

Oh! Totally getting good I loved this chapter!!!! Please write more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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