Date: February 27, 2008 07:37 pm Title: Through That Open Door
Seriously? This is your first full story? AMAZING. My first proper story wasn't fit to be seen.
Seriously this is fantastic. You have Jim and Pam's characters down really well.
Author's Response: Wow. Thanks! Well, it's my first prose piece, I have other scripts up.. but it was still very different for me.Thank you so much!
Date: February 27, 2008 06:44 am Title: Through That Open Door
Great job! I really loved reading it, and it did make me laugh along the way! Really great!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! it really is quite different from writing scripts... I'm glad you liked it!
Date: February 26, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Through That Open Door
aww! This is made of adorable! Cute and nervous and I want to eat it with a spoon!
Dang, I'm miffed we didn't get to see the first date! I'll pretend this is how it went. Well, how it started anyway.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wish we could've seen that first date too. Oh well.... I'm glad you will pretend this is how it started!
Date: February 26, 2008 07:04 pm Title: Through That Open Door
This was so cute! And funny. I loved this line:
"Oh great. Pam Beesly, expert voice thrower, has fooled another one."
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 26, 2008 06:30 pm Title: Through That Open Door
Sigh. Je l'adore.
Author's Response: Not sure what that means but I'll take it as a compliment! Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 06:16 pm Title: Through That Open Door
Nice job, K! Very clever. Nice to have a new angle on the first date.
Author's Response: I wanted to try something a little different. I'm glad you liked!
6 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Through That Open Door
This was such a cute idea. It was a nice first story and I enjoyed reading it. I really felt the anticipation and found myself not being able to wait for the door to be opened. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 26, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Through That Open Door
Very nice! As someone else who has written about Jim and Pam's first date I really liked the sense of anticipation on both their parts...their mutual fears and hopes about what that very big next step they were both about to take, and take together would likely mean...in that moment and for their future. Again, very nice!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have to check out yours!