Date: March 13, 2008 01:47 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
Ooh! I love all the little flashes betwen past and present, to show where they've come. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: March 11, 2008 08:46 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
great job...this was wonderful!
Author's Response: oh, thank you!
Date: March 10, 2008 09:31 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
This is a really great story. I love how you put it together and I love the "yes and no" at the end.
Author's Response: thanks! the structure was really important to me, as important as most of the fic itself. thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:50 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
Beautiful, simply beautiful.
Author's Response: thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:36 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
I just let out an audible sigh/hummm thing. This is so beautiful and stirring. WOW.
Author's Response: i know that sound! glad you liked it - i had such a blast writing this.
Date: March 10, 2008 08:35 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
Wow, this was so perfectly done! I loved the line "probably something about dreams, and them coming true" ...just awesome. On a sort of random note, "I can Hear the Bells" is my favorite Mike Doughty song, and just for fun, I loaded it up while I read this story. You really can feel the flow of the song in the urgency and the hopefulness of Jim's perspective. Awesome!
Author's Response: i definitely listened to that song about a thousand times while i wrote this. for me, it's entirely about the urgency - glad you felt it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 07:26 pm Title: slug it out/sick of waiting
Really beautiful, EL. I wish I could be more profound--it's just that good.
Author's Response: no that certainly will suffice. thanks for writing!