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Reviewer: OldCrow97 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2009 01:01 am Title: Eleven

Uh oh! Please don't be over yet!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 08:54 pm Title: Eleven

Awh super fluff!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! : )

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 04:43 pm Title: Eleven

Awwwww.....I've missed this story! It's been ages since you last updated. I'm surprised Michael didn't plan any "activities" like beach games. Jim and Pam are too cute!! I hope it lasts and Karen doesn't ruin it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: If you don't like spoilers, then don't read what I'm about to put in starsrn***** I was totally planning on putting a beach games bit in this story. And I read your review and figured that you must read my mind. NICE!*****rnrnAnyway, I'm glad you are happy this story is back! I'm so sorry for my long break... Hopefully I won't do that again!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 02:30 pm Title: Eleven

This chapter was beyond cute. The whole thing with building a sandcastle was great (and in no way dorky. i'm 20 and still build them).
THe two little girls and the talk about kids in the future was charming.

Loving the sweetness of the story and can't wait for the sailboat adventure.
Cheers



Author's Response: Thank you so much for yet again, such a sweet review! I'm so happy you give me such praise.. It means a lot!rnAnd I still build sandcastles, too. I go full out and buy stuff at home depot that can substitute for sandcastle tools, and not to toot my own horn (did I just write that? LAME), but they turn out pretty neat!

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