Date: September 08, 2008 08:59 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Sweet and clever. I agree that Pam is secure enough now that she is okay with the surprises.
But she doesn’t imagine fences.
Nice. I was two lines further along before I realized the significance of this sentence and had to go back. It is worked in very smoothly for something so significant.
I know this is old... but hey, quality doesn't go stale :)
Date: June 07, 2008 05:50 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Loved this. You've done a great job capturing Pam's thoughts, and how they've changed now that she has a joyful relationship. I really enjoyed this sweet and insightful look into Pam's mind.
Date: April 22, 2008 01:56 pm Title: the same way as she did before
I've started reading this like 5 times. Now I must finish it!
And now I can't review because all I've got is a giant smile on my face.
Author's Response: lol yay! I'm glad a brought a smile to your face with this little number ;-) That's always a good thing, right?
Date: April 19, 2008 03:59 pm Title: the same way as she did before
"She doesn’t worry anymore. She doesn't plan. Instead she just lets herself be happy right now, like this." Really enjoyed this. Nice continuation of their hapiness we saw on the show the other night.
Author's Response: thanks kaystar ;-)
She doesn't plan.
Instead she just lets herself be happy right now, like this."
Really enjoyed this. Nice continuation of their hapiness we saw on the show the other night.
Date: April 19, 2008 05:05 am Title: the same way as she did before
You know, I can remember a very distinct moment in my life where I felt just exactly like this, where instead of trying to wrap everything up tight, I decided to just let go and let someone share the reins (no G) and go along for the wonderful ride without thinking too much about where we were heading. I LOVE to think that this is how Pam feels right now. The part where reassuring him satisfies something organic in her...yeah. That's so right. Very sweet and very insightful look into Pam's blissful mind.
Author's Response: reins, reigns, rains, rainns, I mean. come on. for god's sack, shut your fried baloney hole.
Date: April 18, 2008 09:57 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Outstanding. What a little nugget of gold this one is. You so often manage to go sort of one layer deeper in your characterization with bits like:
She thinks later she’ll be glad she hasn’t thought about yards and bedrooms because thinking about it alone seems unfair to him, and she knows he has plans that he doesn’t speak out loud.
Really well done.
Author's Response: Thanks brokenloon I'm really excited that you liked this. That's actually my favorite sentence in the whole piece, too. You know me so well ;-)
Date: April 18, 2008 09:51 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Stablergirl...I'm in love with you. I know it might be weird for you that but I need you to hear it...once.
oh wait...I probably shouldn't laugh...should I? I'm supposed to say: What are you doing? I can't.
Date: April 18, 2008 09:11 pm Title: the same way as she did before
I myself hate surprises, but I think it's good for Pam to have some time to just get some joy from life, instead of trying to squeeze everything into the mold she thinks it should fit into. Nice character work in this. --Strider
Author's Response: yeah I'm not big on surprises either, but I figure Pam might be in that mindset ;-) Thanks for reviewing, I love it!
Date: April 18, 2008 06:10 pm Title: the same way as she did before
What a lovely dessert to the absolute JAM feast Thursday's eppy gave us! As gooshy as I get just thinking about Jim and Pam's happily ever after, I don't want it to happen just yet so I love this interlude that hints at that but is content to just relish the wonder of their relationship now. And this?
Sometimes when he has his arms wrapped long around her and his voice vibrates through his chest and her back and into the core of her she imagines that they’re older and that they’re still in love like this.
Simply spectacular Stablergirl!
Author's Response: lol that is the perfect description of this! A lovely dessert ;-) Thanks I love that sentence too, and I'm so glad you reviewed, I love reading your reviews all of the time!! The best of the best of reviewers for sure, SeluciaV, for sure.
Date: April 18, 2008 01:25 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Niiiiiicccccce...Sorry that is the best Kevin impression i got. Great story as usual. Now where's my Chair Model steamy smutty story???? I'm begging.... come on!! I know you have one, so give it up!!! You one talented girl.
Author's Response: lol I might try to come up with something more smutty, but I'm a bit distracted by famous right now. So this was the best I could do, lol.
Date: April 18, 2008 12:58 pm Title: the same way as she did before
Lovely mood piece. Very lyrical, and you captured well Pam's current state of mind, I think.
Author's Response: thank you! You know me and the mood pieces, lol always favorites of mine. Thanks for reiviewing. ;-)
Date: April 18, 2008 10:30 am Title: the same way as she did before
Beautiful! I think it's a beautiful blending of her past and future, and the growth in between.
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad it seems like their past and their future, that's so nice.
Date: April 18, 2008 08:29 am Title: the same way as she did before
YAY! Post-CM is the best!
She thinks later she’ll be glad she hasn’t thought about yards and bedrooms because thinking about it alone seems unfair to him... Now that is love. Dreaming together. Sigh.
Author's Response: lol sigh indeed. so sweet, right? sorry it took me so long to respond to this, I've been agonizing over my latest famous, but I think it's done (finally) so I'm responding to all these reviews while I wait for my beta to give me back my mojo stick. lol. thanks for reading this one and leaving an awesome review, as usual!
Date: April 18, 2008 08:20 am Title: the same way as she did before
so great. and so how i'd think of pam feeling in the post chair model revelations. though i have my suspicions...wouldn't it just like, be great if she totally beat jim at his game? like was onto him and just BAM proposed to him before he could beat her to the punch? i need to slow the thoughts down in my head. anyway, great stuff, stablergirl, as always!
Author's Response: lol thank you! I hope Pam feels like this, anyway, because this is how I would feel if I was her. ;-)