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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2018 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just love how you’ve painted this beautiful picture of Jim being so honest and vulnerable but also hopeful and cherishing their love. Thank you for this lovely piece.

Reviewer: Vitamin-D Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25, 2010 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Thank you :)

Reviewer: jenna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 02:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Gah! That was so perfect. So SO perfect. I'm running to check and see if you have any more stories for me to read.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Perfect.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful...just beautiful.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1

yeah, no way Jim goes all summer without making sure she knows it's forever.  Nicely done, unfold.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I've read this about 5 times.  It's so weird, whenever I read one of your stories, I click on the chapter, thinking, 'I know this is going to be good, I can't wait to see where she's taking me'.  Then, I start to read, and even though I'm expecting you to kick my ass, you always manage some kind of sneak attack, like Jim on the phone, talking about his dinner and TV-watching and how he doesn't know what to do next without her there, and I'm on the mat, knocked out again.  Just wonderful. 

Reviewer: shootingstars Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1

This is absolutely beautiful, as is frankly everything you write. I love that it's honest about the difficulties of a separation and yet remains optimistic because it's them and 3 months in New York isn't going to kill them completely.

Reviewer: Jewelsy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2008 01:46 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved it. But I want more. Your story had a sadness to it. I'm a sucker for a fluffy ending. I loved it anyway.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

:::sigh::: I love everything about this. Somehow you managed to make it ok that he waited to propose. Don't know you did that other than just how freaking sweet and beautiful this was. Thank you!

Reviewer: emily1414 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

beautiful.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

You're always able to capture something special about their relationship in your stories.  That was so sweet without being maudlin, and just very much Jim and Pam. :)

Reviewer: missjasadin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

so beautiful

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was really, really lovely. One thing I love about your stories is your simplicity and honestly. Like here...everything isn't perfect, but it works and it's honest and it's completely Jim and Pam. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Kestrel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. Sweet, simple, and above all honest. You wrote it beautifully.

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