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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2019 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have read this several times (THANKS random story on the main page). It makes me both sad and happy at once, so I'm always happy to see it.

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

is your title from play crack the sky by brand new?
???

Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

So, so lovely and simple and right for them. Thank you for posting this little gem.

Reviewer: Aurorabee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness! I love this! I could see it, feel it. Well done.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. I so wish this could have happened, so simple. So perfect. It totally fits in with that episode also.

Wow. 

Reviewer: andromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Unfold -
Your stories are such a guilty of pleasure of mine, whenever I get a chance I check to see what new stories you have written. You have a great understanding of the characters and manage to always bring a fresh perspective to the history of Jim and Pam. yay!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guh.  I <3 Booze Cruise.  So many possibilities...

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1

You amaze me, unfold.  How are you able to do this--to take something a few years old and make it seem new?  This, in particular, struck me as such a vivid image:  He tilts his head back to look at her upside down face after he says it. She’s staring blankly ahead and just nods. She feels him looking at her though and her eyes flick down to his, sticking there for a moment. He turns his head back almost instantly, not liking how much he feels in that single instance. 
 Excellent (as always).

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 03:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I love how subtle but laden the language is here. So many beautifully phrased, simple details that imply so much about what they're feeling, like: the positioning is awkward and she has to lean over a bit to even reach his hand or but suddenly her face is hovering above him or finally - and absolutely gorgeously:  the words coming out in a cloud. And the final two words kind of say everything. Hopeful, but not tied up in a neat little package. 

Reviewer: downtown Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1

what stunning visualization. loved this. 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  Really interesting.  She's making the first move there, by holding his hand.  While I approve of this BoozeCruisePam, I'm not sure I've ever met this particular BoozeCruisePam.   I definitely like her, though.  Also the "Yeah" and the fingers tightening.  

Nice job.  This might be one that sort of sticks with me for a while, one that I keep thinking back on. 

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG...I want to cry.

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

amazing.

i love that little feeling of hope at the end. its just so beautiful.

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

amazing.

i love that little feeling of hope at the end. its just so beautiful.

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

:) I love the way you write - it's so fluid if that makes any sense. I'm sure i have no idea where this is going but i like it so far

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is lovely and simple an insanely poetic. Are you going to add another chapter? I really hope you do.

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice start, love these kind of fic's write more ASAP! Pretty please.

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