Date: July 30, 2008 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the final bit of spec. A happy Michael makes me happy and he's never truly happy with Jan. I love the twist, though, that it really is his child.
Date: July 25, 2008 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice job, bebitched! A little sad, but I think Jan's life has been a bit sad like this. I was very glad when you revealed who the bride was at the end. That would be a good ending for Michael, I think; and the alternative is not a good choice!
Thank you for writing about non-JAM characters; sadly, it's not the way to get a lot of reviews, but I'm glad there are people who still do it.
Date: July 25, 2008 10:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This is sad and sweet and somehow much saner than the Jan we've seen lately. Very evocative. Nicely done.
Date: July 24, 2008 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have a deep, unexplainable fascination with Jan's character, and this fic was the first that I think really did it justice. Very well done.