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Reviewer: Dundie All-Star Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

You already know what I think, but I want to keep up with my Jack-esque lines for every chapter. Here's this chapter's winner:

The creepiness of the phrase was dulled some by the tenderness in his voice, but the smile that spread across his face next was enough to make anyone uncomfortable.

Onward and upward!

Author's Response: I felt Jack-like when I wrote that, actually...mysterious and talented. Then I snapped out of it and realized I'm neither that mysterious nor that talented. ;)

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is such a fun story and I really like all the additional info you have for us at the end of the chapters. I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - it was fun to write and produce all the extras for, too! Hope you continue to enjoy! :)

Reviewer: Madison Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really like this a lot! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much - I will! :)

Reviewer: SkeetShruting Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yeah for Chapter 3! Kali is my favorite ride in AK, and I visit All Ears alot. I really love how the dialogue is very true to the character's, especially Michael and Dwight. Can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response: I gotta tell you, SS, due to some mobility issues I have I've never been on Kali, but from all I've heard it's a blast. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

I don't usually like fics in which everyone makes a really extravagant trips together, but this works. Jim's playlists, the shirts, etc is very cool--almost interactive. I listened to the songs while reading. 


Author's Response: Thanks! I know this is a bit of a stretch, but I wanted to write this so badly that I did my best to come up with a semi-plausible explanation. :) Glad you enjoy the story and the bonuses - more of both to come. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thoroughly enjoying this, LC.  BTW, thanks for fixing the playlist link.  I'm looking forward to listening to it.  I really appreciate your attention to detail.  My family and I are going to WDW in a couple months, so this is fun preparation : )

Author's Response: Oh, hey, um...do you have an extra spot? I'm not picky; I'll sleep on a floor. I'll travel in a trunk. I'll pay my own way. Just come pick me up too! :) Thanks for all the support and enjoy the playlist! :)

Reviewer: jimandpaminlove Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, I want to see Jim and Pam go on "It's a Small World After All." Dark, romantic...*wink. I think they can block out the music. : )

Author's Response: I can make a lot of strange things romantic, JimandPaminlove, but even I don't have the power to make that romantic. But I promise you that when we get to the Magic Kingdom "it's a small world" is included. Deal? :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jillyree Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2008 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMG!  I just have to say...how much do I love that Jim has both The Muppets, The Beatles, George Michael AND Tom Petty on his vacation playlist?  Oh yeah, and the chapter was great!  I too, am a Disney-aholic (my sister and her family are there right now) and am ejnoying this story immensely as I can "see" it all in my minds eye!

Author's Response: The playlist is pretty great...I know that sounds arrogant, but c'mon - Jim can put a list together! :) So glad you're enjoying the story! :)

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