10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2008 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
It was a close race in this chapter for the most Jack-esque line, but here's our winner:
Michael posed as he so often did when he knew he was about to say something brilliant.
I do realize these are buttons, but come on, I wrote paragraph upon paragraph of what I loved about this on FF. Go read those reviews to refresh your memory. :)
Author's Response: The fact that you have reviewed at all, let alone a SECOND TIME, is appreciated beyond measure. You're the best. :)
Date: September 09, 2008 09:42 am Title: Chapter 4
I *loved* the date when I read it, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks a lot! :)
Date: September 08, 2008 06:25 am Title: Chapter 4
I love love LOVE this story! (question: will they be eating at raglan road? i just went there for the first time on my last trip! it was awesome.)
Author's Response: Well thanks thanks THANKS! :) And Nbyevu...I don't want to give anything away, but let's just say that query raised my brows several inches. Are you psychic? ;)
Date: September 08, 2008 06:24 am Title: Chapter 4
LC, your voices in this story are really great. I'm so enjoying this little vacation to the happiest place on earth. Two passages that stood out for me:
“’Kishy’? What kind of artsy fartsy word is that, Pam? Stop trying to impress your new BFF,” Michael scolded her. So funny and so Michael; and,
Angela: (standing at the entrance to the Dinosaur attraction) It has not been a good day. I followed Michael aimlessly for hours this morning. It’s extremely hot. Now I have to ride a ride that will no doubt contradict directly with Genesis. Nothing good has happened. (Angela listens to a word from off camera; she suddenly looks a little guilty. ) Well of course it was nice to see my…fiancé beat Dwight. From Sales. (Her eyes flit downward. ) Perfect Angela.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! That Michael line is one of my favorites in that chapter and you are the first ever to mention it! And I think that Angela moment is hilarious and yet sad...so I'm thrilled you liked it. :)