10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2008 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
It's a tie! And the winners are:
And for the record, there are plenty of women that have no issue with toys. (The left corner of his lips quirks upward disturbingly. ) Of any kind.
And...
Dwight sat up as if a string attached to the top of his head had been yanked violently.
This story is the Dizz!!! (Like Disney and shizz kinda mixed together...? Maybe?)
Author's Response: Thanks, and yikes. Just yikes. That was rough. :)
Date: September 12, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love dorky Jim! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I will! :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
"And for the record, there are plenty of women that have no issue with toys. (The left corner of his lips quirks upward disturbingly. ) Of any kind."
Oh. My. God.
I'm not sure that I'm ever going to be able to get rid of the image those lines have burned into my brain.
Really getting a kick out of your story. Makes me want to visit Disney. You have great descriptions...and I really like your dorky Jim, he's adorable. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm (disturbingly) pleased I've left a lasting impression. And more of dorky!Jim coming soon... :)
Date: September 11, 2008 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
Haha, Dwight and Andy in this chapter were so funny. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love the Dwight/Andy (Dwandy?) dynamic, so you'll see a lot more before this story is over... :)
Date: September 11, 2008 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
And for the record, there are plenty of women that have no issue with toys. (The left corner of his lips quirks upward disturbingly. ) Of any kind. Oh man--you went there.
Fact: just finished making my Disney dining reservations on Tuesday night. Fact: Tower of Terror is my favorite amusement ride in the world.
Loving this. Have a great weekend, Little Comment.
Author's Response: Oh, I DID go there. Holla? Anyway, Nan, I want to hear all about your trip to my "homeland," if you want to share. Because of my mobility issues (and yeah, my terrible fear of broken elevators), I've never been on ToT, but all I've heard are amazing things. :) Thanks as always!
Date: September 11, 2008 10:39 am Title: Chapter 6
I just love living a Disney experience through the DM gang. It's so much fun. And those turkey legs that Stanley was eating? Those gross me out so much! I usually go in the summer, and watching someone eat a turkey leg at noon on a 95 degree day makes me squirm. (I much prefer the Mickey-head ice cream bars). I am very excited about the rest of this story :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! You know, I've never had one of those turkey legs...mostly because, like you said, they never seem appealing on a sweltering day. Thank you for the review! :)
Date: September 11, 2008 09:35 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm guessing Dwight's 'toy' comment was the disturbing one.
And bonus points for the Yoda quote: "Do or do not do. There is no try."
BTW -- Pam & Jim alone at WDW would still be entertaining, but they'd have to show it on HBO after dark.
Author's Response: Bingo! Yeah, I caught a lot of "WTF? Eeew" at FF.net for that line, but my warped mind stands proudly by it. ;) And yes, Jim and Pam would be fun, but I liken it to recounting a trip myself - fun, funny, but not nearly as entertaining as if, oh, Dwight was there too. ;) And HBO...what in God's name do you have planned for our Pim at the Happiest Place on Earth, Miss Lisa? :) Maybe someone can write an MA spin-off after this is through. I'll leave that to someone more capable. ;)