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Reviewer: sangriaflygirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 13

I love this story! As a fiction writer, an Office fan, and a huuuuge Disney fan, this story has it all. I love that you capture the show with the talking heads and the characters and dialogue are so spot-on. I seriously check every day to see if you update, haha. Mad props, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: You're my kind of girl, sangriaflygirl - a writer, and Office fan AND a Disney dork? Yay! Thanks for all your kind words and hope that you continue to enjoy! :)

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ha I love your enthusiasm. :D
What a great chapter. I could totally see Jims face talking about Space Mountain (that ride scares me too lol)
-Abby

Author's Response: Thanks! Mr. Comment is VERY tall and I'm ashamed to say that Jim's TH there was pretty much a direct quote from him from our last trip. :)

Reviewer: Madison Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, but I have been reading, it's still just as great. I'm excited for the next chapter!

Author's Response: No worries, Madison - I just love hearing from everyone and making new pals, so whenever you get a chance just say hi - and I'm so happy you're still liking this bit of silliness! Thanks! :)

Reviewer: lahoorah Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 11:44 am Title: Chapter 13

All I can say is... This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read!!! You have the characters down to a T! And I totally want to go to Disneyworld now (I've never been *tear*)! Please please please continue with the story! I so wish this was canon!



Author's Response: Thanks, Lahoorah! I can't believe you've never been to Disney World - it's my unofficial homeland! :) If you ever feel lost as I refer to rides, shows or anything, please check out this site for all the info (and if that link doesn't work, just go to allears.net). Thanks for a great review! :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 10:01 am Title: Chapter 13

My dear Little Comment, let me start by reiterating that this story really is a delight.  That may be the Disney geek in me gushing, but so what?!  I have been thoroughly immersed in each update, and I'm hoping for that pre-premier post.  Hook a sister up, will ya?!  How can I not want to read your favorite chapter?!  I'm sure it will be mine, too.  Now, back to this one...

 The Dwight/Andy rivalry is just so funny.  I can just picture them on the Buzz Lightyear ride.  I happen to suck at that, by the way.  Loved the image of Stanley and Creed.  And most of all, you really got me with Michael and the wheelchair : )  I'll be sitting patiently...waiting...for that next update...  Am I making you feel bad?  A little?  C'mon now...



Author's Response: Oh Nan, how I love having you along for this ride...I feel like I've made a new friend, through my two main interests in life! Huzzah! :)

I'm sorry I didn't hook a sister up - I'm still on this wacky schedule and we woke up about two hours before the premiere, so I didn't get a chance to get anything else up (TWSS?).

I also suck at BL. That ride is so fun, yet I suck. And Michael...what a...character. ;) Glad you're digging the Dwandy...it was kinda more fun to write than anything else, and that includes Jim and Pam. YES, I JUST SAID THAT. ;) Hope you dig the next chapter as much as I do!

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 07:51 am Title: Chapter 13

Oh, you're good. "Homer's Barbershop Quartet" is indeed a staple in our home. I had the same thought when you mentioned "Coney Island Baby." (Oh, and the Dapper Dans appear at Disneyland too - would it be too dorky to say that I kind of love them? Yes? Then I won't.). Oh, and then the House reference too? Gold!

If you need inspiration, I for one am looking forward to the next chapter. Here's hoping the proposal torture is almost over!

Author's Response: High five, Blanca - I adore the Dapper Dans too, and this seemed such a good set-up to reference that Simspons episode...who am I to argue with that? ;) And glad you liked the House bit too...'cause c'mon, it's NEVER LUPUS! :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2008 05:22 am Title: Chapter 13

This was a good chapter...and I have to say that my scores on the Buzz Lightyear right are unfortunately similar to those of Andy and Dwight. I suck at that...although I'm convinced that some of them are rigged to get millions of points. I once started with 10000 points or something. It was weird. Anyhoo, I hope I'm not raining on your parade or anything, but I kind of hope Jim doesn't propose during the fireworks and stuff. I feel that would be kind of...cliche. And while it was totally cool to have seen one of those proposals (on the deck of the California Grill...that was cool), I think Jim would want to be more creative. But if he's desperate enough and is out of plans....AHH. You make me so confused. So just post the next chapter before I lose my mind. (That was me "inspiring you to hurry in posting it.") 

Author's Response: I suck at the Buzz Lightyear ride too, nbyevu! Oh well.

You're not raining on my parade at all - to each his own...I just want to know why you think there'll be a proposal at all? Hmm...

Did I just blow your mind? ;)

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