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Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

I've been waiting for Jim to have the conversation with Judy! And since I haven't said it yet, Jim's list is adorable. Thanks for keeping me on my post-episode high. This was a fantastic installment. I can't wait to see how the rest turns out.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the Jim/Judy bit (and Jim's list), and I hope you'll be pleased with the end...it's coming up soon!

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

Ouch, you cliffhangered my face!  Buy me an ice cream cone to make me feel better?  Or at least hurry up with the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: I did neither, Mrs. LH...forgive me? Hope it didn't leave a bruise (TWSS?)... :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 09:50 am Title: Chapter 14

Awww...I can see why this is your favorite, LC.  Standouts (as they come to me):  Jim and Judy's convo obviously.  So heartfelt.  Also, Angela and Pam.  Michael is just a trainwreck.  Holy cow.  Managing to decapitate the Mouse?  Man oh man!  I felt soooo bad for Jim.  I may have mentioned this previously, but I really love Jim's list and, in particular, the photo of the Kermit box.  I really appreciate the thought you put into the little details. 

Author's Response: Thanks, Nan, for all kind remarks! I hope that Jim/Judy convo wasn't too deus ex machina, but I think it works. And the Pamgela was not a bit I planned, but once I kicked out Jim it fit. :) And I'm glad you're digging the bonuses! :)

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