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Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 16

This is such a cute story.  It's very hard to incorporate the whole office and you're doing a great job.  Just one question....is Pam's bracelet for Jim or for her?  Should it say Mrs. Jim Halpert?  I'm confused.  :-/ Nevermind - I got it. :)

Evil of you to leave it there though.  Write. More. Soon. :)  

Reviewer: Madison Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 16

AH, you can't leave me hanging. More, please!

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 03, 2008 09:30 am Title: Chapter 16

aw what a way to end the chapter.  Poor Jim.  Poor Pam.

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh, that was cruel of you. And kind of cruel of Pam too, actually. I mean, poor Jim is in PAIN, in more ways than one. And she's just going to leave him there like that? Ouch.

But that said, I'm really looking forward to your next chapter and the resolution of this little Disney adventure. It's been a really fun ride seeing the parks through all of their eyes. And Magic Kingdom has most of my favorites - Pirates, Jungle Cruise, Haunted Mansion. Classics all.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 16

Holly's arrival does add some lightness -- she's so... great.  And she does make Michael forget to be such a jackass.  Win.

I loved the little Jim/Dwight bonding.

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