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Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Superb, as always, unfold. A polished jewel. It's tough to pick out any one moment over another, but if I had to, I would say

We are sloppy and frantic and love you love you love you against our skin

sums up that moment after "Yes" so, so beautifully. And your last paragraph should go in the Fanfic Hall of Fame.

Reviewer: bashert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2008 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, this is pretty much the most awesome thing in the universe. Beautiful, I love the point of view, and I loved:

We say, "You, you,you,you,"because it seems like the only thing that's ever mattered at all

Beautiful

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

THIS is gorgeous. Sigh. A very lovely thing to come home to indeed. Another gem, unfold.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was simply delicious, unfold.  Frantic, passionate, delirious.  Loved it.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

About time, isn't it? Beautiful.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is just lovely. It's them.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

And this story is gorgeous.

And this line is the most beautiful thing I've read lately and says it all so perfectly:

"We say, “Finally, finally,” as our eyes start to flood because the past is always present but we can only be grateful for it now, because even though it has scarred us, it has also shaped us, made us into this and this is perfect, this is everything we have ever wanted, this is the only place we were ever meant to be and that was the only way we could have ever gotten here"

Reviewer: Annika Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

We say, “Finally, finally,” as our eyes start to flood because the past is always present but we can only be grateful for it now, because even though it has scarred us, it has also shaped us, made us into this and this is perfect, this is everything we have ever wanted, this is the only place we were ever meant to be and that was the only way we could have ever gotten here.

And this sums up beautifully the whole moment.  Their lives.  Their future.  Well done.  

Reviewer: beruco Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

SIGH. How do you make them even more gorgeous?

Reviewer: flonkerton Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2008 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

you know how much i love this and it makes me want to cry. ilu

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