1 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2022 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
How can you make something this sad so beautiful?! That's some dark magic
1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is brilliant and beautiful and moving and powerful and makes me want to cry and hug them and shake them until they realize what they're doing.
1 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2019 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a story I often find myself coming back to, so beautifully written and every part is equally hopeful and heartbreaking.
1 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2019 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Better than The Notebook. No joke. That’s the comparison that came to mind with the rain and the declarations but you quickly left that in the dust with your beautiful phrasing and achingly realistic ending. Thank you for this.
1 [Report This]Date: February 11, 2019 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
So this one hurts me, deep in my gut, in a way that reminds me that for all my problems with how the show did go, and how they teased out the angst and the separation, they could have done a lot worse.
Did I say worse? Because I don't want in any way to imply this isn't wonderfully written or emotionally true, just that it is both those things in a truly painful way precisely because it hits right on the edge of plausible but painful. Really well done.
Date: December 27, 2008 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god, beautiful.
9 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2008 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was great. You captured the anger, the sadness, the desperation and the love so beautifully, without being trite or cliched. I loved it.
Date: December 21, 2008 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't know how it is that I only got around to reading this, but arghsgbfjhmhgdfterwrf. That just broke my heart, and oh my God, it was so good.
10 [Report This]Date: October 06, 2008 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so beautiful and heartbreaking, and I appreciate so much that it's just a little hopeful at the end. I love the desperation I felt for both of them in this story. I had tears in my eyes the whole time.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2008 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Breathtaking. Wow.
Date: September 29, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was beautifully done, although painful to read!
Date: September 29, 2008 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Ow.
Beautifully done. *sniff*
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2008 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I already reviewed this on livejournal, but I feel the need to reiterate my point because this is probably the best thing I've read. I wait every week for a new story of yours because each gets better. Your abilities as a writer continue to astound me and leave me a tiny bit jealous.
This story was nothing short of incredible. I'm favoriting this.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2008 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1
I think there is a string attached to my insides with this story. They are in a puddle on the floor next to my chair!
Date: September 29, 2008 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1
You again. Just when I’m feeling a little over fanfic, you go and do this. This is gorgeous, but not just gorgeous for gorgeous sake. Even though it’s AU, reading it adds another facet to what I know about the hearts and minds of these very specific characters. And your final paragraph is particularly fine- so sad, vaguely hopeful, but promising nothing (just like S3.)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2008 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this despite (because of?) the angst. Inspired by rainy proposals but in a different way, eh? Fantastic. It just confirms how much I enjoy your style of writing, unfold.
Date: September 29, 2008 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1
You never fail to completely knock me out. I just love all the emotions you bring to the surface here - guilt, lust, longing, regret, hope, shame - and I love the way you do it. Wonderful.
Date: September 28, 2008 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree with what everyone has said - that was beautiful, and I would love to read more should you have anything planned. As an angst junkie, I hope it keeps coming in fanfic land despite all the happiness going on in the actual show.
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2008 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. What an incredibly moving, tragic story. Very well done.
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2008 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely beautiful. And totally hot, too :) I want more!
Date: September 28, 2008 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just, wow. That was so powerful. I'm speechless. Whew. That was amazing. It's going to be hard to sleep running that story over and over in my head.
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2008 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. This was so painful and so beautiful and compelling. I cannot pick out any passages that stand out because the whole damn thing is perfection. Just beautiful imagery and, as notatoy mentioned, pacing and dialogue.
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2008 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God. That was amazing. The voices, the pacing. Wow. I promise - I'll be more coherent soon, but just, yeah, wow.
Date: September 28, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unfold, I just have to say that I am in such awe of you and your abilities as a writer. I've never written a fic before, but I've been a regular lurker here for about a year and I just always always always ADORE your work! This story was no exception. I got chills throughout the entire thing....I just love how perfectly flawed you've made both Jim and Pam in this story, and I love well you connect Pam's emotions to our emotions as the audience. I look forward to more of your work (especially LONG ones like this!!) Thanks again!