10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2009 07:30 am Title: Chapter 7: The Convention - part III
Also, HE told HER to LEAVE HIM ALONE.... ahhhh Jon needs to smack them both.
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2009 07:20 am Title: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II
I wanna smack Pam, but also have Jon's babies.
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2009 06:51 am Title: Chapter 3: Gay Witch Hunt - part III
I want to marry your fic brain and have it's babies.
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2009 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Gay Witch Hunt
Okay you seriously win at life, this is mind blowing and I am actually crying.
Date: June 07, 2007 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Gay Witch Hunt
There had been a million little moments like that – moments that had kept him hanging on, had led him to this night….
Holy God. I can't tell you how many of these "moments" I've had in my life. It's so true that you just magnify these little, stupid moments and think they mean something much bigger and then when they don't... Oy. Wow. Awesome chapter... and I've just begun. (If I don't get marking done tomorrow, I'm leaving YOU responsible! LOL)
Date: October 26, 2006 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
I just discovered your stories not too long ago and I have to say I love them. You've got such a knack for their voices. Capture all those cute-sexy little things that Jim does. Love it! Please continue to be our Jam lifeline during these dark Jam days. lol
Date: October 23, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
OMG, this makes the Conversation even more 'squeeworthy'! I just love how you fill in the gaps behind the dialog we saw on Thursday. It does a JAMmy heart good!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2006 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
I melted into a puddle of goo when I read the first part of this chapter. Wow. Then I pulled myself together and read the rest. So good - everything was so in character for them.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it. I knew everyone was a little...antsy and in need of a happy ending. And since I couldn't stick with the format of what happened on the show with this and still do a happy ending, I figured I'd cheat and skip ahead a little. :o) Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
I'd been waiting for this from you, and I wasn't disappointed. You are *so* good at getting in their heads...it's a gift you have, really.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - seriously. It makes me feel so great to hear that you were waiting for this! I got spoiled by the interest in Away From the Cameras (but then again, that had a bazillion chapters, so maybe it wasn't that it was read/reviewed by that many people, but that it got several reviews from each for each chapter). ANyway, I was hoping this would generate as much feedback as that one did, but it's impossible to write this as the season progresses, if that makes any sense.
All this to say: Thank you so much for the review! :O) I'll keep 'em coming!
Date: October 22, 2006 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
wow that was a great chapter.
Author's Response: Thak you so much - and thanks for reviewing, too!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2006 06:55 am Title: Chapter 9: Initiation
This was so beautiful. The emotions were just as real and raw as they were in the episode. Excellent job!!
Author's Response: Yay! I loved what you did with the "after" conversation, too, by the way - it was perfect. Thanks for the feedback!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
As always, your Jim/Jon interaction is priceless. Jonathan really does serve as the voice of reason...if only Jim AND Pam had him on the show to make them see their way!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
Yea to Jon for helping to cast doubts in Jim's mind. I especially loved this line -
"Sometimes he really didn’t like it that Jonathan knew him so well."
Date: October 13, 2006 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
I love your introduction of the cameramen and their reaction to the story playing out in front of them. I like it so much I may even steal it....
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
Thank you, thank you for coming up with a plausible reason why Pam seems so cold in front of the cameras. It has been driving me nuts.
I'm really loving this, and think I actually need it and fics like to survive the absolute dirth of Jim and Pam (and the Jim/Karen. Stupid chips.) on the program.
More, more!
Date: October 13, 2006 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
All right, last night's episode pissed me off so much
Amen, sister! I almost can convince myself that Jim and Pam are just hiding their love from the camera. But I can't believe he's hiding it from Jonathan as well! Another great chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
Jon is such a great brother to Jim. You write him so well
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 11:30 am Title: Chapter 8: The Coup
Rick shrugged. “He’s a really agreeable guy – gracious as hell, and not very good at concealing his feelings anyway..."
Ohhh, Jim. Just...Jim. So Jim. Bless his heart.
I crave these stories. Literally just NEED them! More more more! =)
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Convention - part III
Pam's journal entry broke my heart. I wish those two would just communicate already! I have every faith that Jonathan will wear them both down eventually.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Convention - part III
Glad Pam read something into Jon's conversation with the "would have". And Jim saying he has moved on. Gah. My heart still hurts from the episode and this makes it hurt too.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II
I thought for sure it was Jim she was calling, not Jon. Yea Jon for getting angry with her, too - something has to get through to her!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2006 11:59 am Title: Chapter 5: The Convention - part I
"It just didn’t seem fair that there were a hundred moments like these -- still.
That he could incessantly feel like he was losing her all over again" - loved this. Watching Jim's face when he heard that Pam had a date was heartbreaking. You captured it perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II
I'm really starting to dislike Pam. I mean, I love her, but why is she so stupid? Any chance with a guy like Jim is better than a sure thing with a guy like the cartoonist.
Poor Jonathan--confidant for both sides. He should really tell Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II
It just gets better and better! Wonderful. Can't wait for more:)
8 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2006 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Convention: Part II
Oooo, terrific angst - you didn't lie. These two broken people need to mend one another.