Date: December 19, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
New KaPam is always awesome. I'm not sure about the style of this one, but I know that you're always pushing the boundaries of grittiness (at least for stories that are based on a comedy) so I can appreciate what you do, and you've done it here.
I would like to say that I would like it better if the unexpected came in pie (yum) or wrapped in bows. Most of mine usually come in floods.