10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2010 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Pam and Jim went on with their lives and Roy was stuck. I never thought I'd feel anything, much less pity, for Roy. Great characterizations.
10 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2009 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy reading this story from Roy's POV. You managed to let us see glimpses of Jim's & Pam's life from the perspective of someone who was part of that triangle.
The ending was perfect, no bitterness, just sort of bittersweet.
Date: February 10, 2008 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, I loved the fluffy happy couple-y-ness between Jim and Pam but at the same time, I did feel a bit sorry for Roy being forced to witness it all the time. *sigh* =)
Date: December 30, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unlike others I truly had no idea who you were referring to the whole time. And I got pretty angry until I found out Roy was the one watching her. Great story though you really made me feel sorry for Roy, which is a first.
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2007 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1
This is another really nice piece. Getting into the minds of the characters is something I always approve of, especially when you turn classically unsympathetic individuals into tragic cases. My only wish was that it wasn't quite so obvious from the start who was speaking it through. I see the parallels, but at the same time, I'd like to be surprised again. Maybe I'm just on a watch after reading your last story. This was still great, though, keep it up : )
Date: February 04, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you did a great job with this! For some reason, I knew the whole time that Jim was with Pam but I held my breath until the end to be sure...it was just great. I would love to see more of this type of writing!
Thanks for a great story!
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I kept wanting to scroll down to see who this was, but I refrained, and I'm glad this was from Roy. [Just so you know, I probably would've killed you if it was from Jim. =P] You kept me guessing the whole time, though - and even when I looked back there were no clues, which is the best part of that. Great job, seriously.
I love Jam.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this! Happy Jam and bitter Roy. I can live with that!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a great story! I found myself holding my breath as I read it, I was so afraid the person following her was Jim and that she was married to Roy. Whew! This really was delightful!
Author's Response: HAHA! Then I did well! I wanted you to believe it could be Jim. But alas, 'twas poor Roy. =-) Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sweet. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was well written from Roy's point of view. I could see him stalking Jim/Pam
Author's Response: I could too, but in this story he wasn't really stalking, he just saw them everywhere he went and he knew he sucked. =-)