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Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 01, 2009 10:01 pm Title: He Was Mine

Very nice! What a twist!
Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you for taking the time to review, that is always appreciated. I just figured, what could be the worst situation relationship-wise? Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2009 01:17 pm Title: He Was Mine

=(

I'm very glad that this didn't happen in...real life, I guess? Haha, but seriously, this was sad and heartbreaking but beautiful and very realistic. I loved it! You should write more like this, because you do a fantastic job.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I know we all like Jim and Pam obviously, that's why we're here. But real life just never quite goes the way most people would like, right? Pam easily could have lost them both in the real world...Thank goodness the writers were smarter than that though!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2009 02:53 pm Title: He Was Mine

This was painful and sad. Are you sure it doesn't end with Pam waking up from a nightmare to find Jim asleep beside her?  (j/k)

Author's Response: It's so funny you say that because I was actually contemplating a second chapter...

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2009 07:03 pm Title: He Was Mine

ah, angst (:


Author's Response: :) I know it's not my best, but everyone needs a dose of angst once in a while so we don't get spoiled by all the JAMmy goodness, right?

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