1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:14 pm Title: He was mine first, first, first.
Ah! The angst! It burns! But well done.
Date: May 18, 2009 02:36 pm Title: He was mine first, first, first.
I liked this a lot. I definitely think that Pam was inwardly very possessive of Jim, but (like we saw in the show) didn't do anything about it until he was almost gone. I also think that Jim probably did a few little things like the "Oh, I like you" like you wrote, even though he doesn't seem like a very vindictive guy. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! You are very insightful! :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 07:47 am Title: He was mine first, first, first.
Aww, I'm so glad season 3 is over! LOL
Nice job! :)
Author's Response: Me too! And thanks so much!!
Date: May 17, 2009 09:32 pm Title: He was mine first, first, first.
This was great! I especially loved this line:
“He’ll change his mind,” my mother assures with a hopeful voice but a heavy heart, for she knows the burdens of what I lust for.
Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like that line too! :)