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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2009 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

super duper cute :)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2009 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

You are all about the challenges, aren't you? I thought this was great and very believable, especially if Roy and Jim's teams had been playing against each other in like, a tournament or the state finals or something. Very well written, as always, and I loved it!

Author's Response: Ha, I guess I am lately :) I just think it would have made sense for them to have run into each other sometime before working at DM, especially if they're all about the same age, right?

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2009 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

As usual I'm impressed LOL another wicked cute story good job :)

Author's Response: Thanks :) Now onto our story, I promise! It's just that sometimes these little stories get stuck in my head and won't leave til I write them!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2009 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I love the eye contact :)

Author's Response: :) Me too.

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