10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2017 02:32 pm Title: Epilogue
This is incredible! I love the way you tell a story. Really wish you were still around to write more amazing Jam fic!
Date: May 14, 2010 09:04 pm Title: Memories that Fade
reading this for the second time...oh yeahh!
10 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2010 01:23 am Title: Epilogue
This is one of the BEST JAM fics I have ever read!
Date: February 08, 2010 01:40 am Title: Epilogue
Hey there, I love this story and have just been re-reading it. The slow development is brilliant and the kids are just so cute. And of course Pam would fall in love with Jim all over again - who wouldn't!
Just a little heads up - ever since MTT's little meltdown a few weeks ago, your epilogue is missing and it was the only part I couldn't read again! And I remember it being incredibly sweet so if you could repost it, that would be great. Thought I'd let you know (and also tell how much I enjoyed the story!).
Date: January 21, 2010 04:33 am Title: Memories that Fade
I was excited to see a new chapter, but sad at the same time, seeing the "YES" by completed. I will miss this one and ended up rereading every chapter this morning - what a great concept you had with this one and look forward to your next endeavor.
Date: January 20, 2010 04:04 pm Title: Memories that Fade
Great ending. I've loved following this story. I think my favorite line of all might have been "Ellie would be about seven now."
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2010 07:59 pm Title: Epilogue
Aww, that was such a sweet ending to a wonderful story! Fantastic job, and, as always, this has been a pleasure. Great work here, and if you ever need a beta let me know (but the ones you have already seem to be doing just fine!).
Date: January 19, 2010 05:29 pm Title: Epilogue
Til next time... meaning write and email me. I don't care if you have 'school work' Fanfic is clearly more important.
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2010 04:21 pm Title: Epilogue
Awwww cute ending to a super cute story. Thanks for the epilouge :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 19, 2010 09:50 am Title: Epilogue
This epilogue is perfect! It rounds out the story so nicely! I love it! I can't say enough about how much I loved this story!
Date: January 19, 2010 07:36 am Title: Epilogue
:) beautiful...so, so good and I'm sad to see this end.
Bring us another story?:)
Date: January 19, 2010 06:03 am Title: Epilogue
“So we came up with the idea to make Dwight believe that Ben Jim’s clone.” Pam added
Priceless.
Date: January 19, 2010 01:55 am Title: Epilogue
i couldnt belive when i saw this story in most recent, i thought it was over, its great that it wasnt.
lol i love the "british christmas special" idea, and also finally know what was that joke about, brilliant!!
i would love to se ben smirking like jim, awesome.
Date: January 06, 2010 06:09 am Title: Jelly Beans
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful :)
Author's Response: Thank, thank you very much! I'm sure glad this idea worked out okay. And I have you to thank! =)
Date: January 05, 2010 07:01 pm Title: Jelly Beans
loved this. brilliant story and ben an ellie were such a cute touch =]
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was nice writting for Ellie and Ben. Can't wait for the real JAM baby! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 05, 2010 06:59 pm Title: Jelly Beans
loved this. brilliant story and ben an ellie were such a cute touch =]
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the story! I love Ellie and Ben too! They were so much fun to write for! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: January 05, 2010 12:25 am Title: Jelly Beans
if im crying im silly too?. gosh what a great story. a really cute endind.
i love all the memories the re-living the memory of their first time, and the cut tie. oww =)
i wonder what was the prank on dwigth, thoung.
goshh thank you for this story it was angstsy and romantic at the same time. this idea was awesome.
Author's Response: It's never silly to cry!(hopefully they are happy tears?!?) I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for reviewing it, it means a lot! =)
Date: January 04, 2010 08:52 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Aww this makes me sad that it's all over! Well almost. Wow, adding Roy and bringing Kenny into it again was a big shock but I like it. And of course I love Ben and Ellie.
Author's Response: You know what? It makes me sad it's over too (except for a short epilogue, which will be done soon). I wasn't sure about adding Roy, but I don't know, I wanted Pam to have at least see him once after the accident and I thought it was the best way. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Ellie and Ben are awesome, and fun part is that they are real "little" people in my life! =)Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 06:32 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Oh my god, that was so sweet. I love the scene at the grocery store, Roy's temperment and actions seem very realistic - nice job there. I also thought the last scene with Pam coming downstairs was beautiful, the happy and the sad, and all in between. It was so special that it was a family moment. Great job with this story, it was so well done! I've had a great time reading this amazing story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking this story! The grocery store scene is one of my favorites. I just like envisioning them as a normal family. I love putting the Halperts in normal situations. I'm so glad you liked the last scene. That was the pivitol point of the story. I'm glad it came out well! Thank you so much for reading and for all your wonderful reviews. =)
Date: January 04, 2010 05:18 pm Title: Jelly Beans
I will miss this one. You did a great job wrapping it up. Thanks for a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm gald you enjoyed it! =)
Date: January 04, 2010 03:14 pm Title: Jelly Beans
perfect end to a perfect story
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! =)
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 02:17 pm Title: Jelly Beans
Astonishing, outstanding, and wonderful! I absolutely loved this story. Well done! I'm so sad that it's over though. Maybe you could do an epilogue? :) This story was fabulous. I read it in progress, but I'm going to go read the whole thing all over again. You did such a great job and such a surprise at who caused the accident! I didn't see that coming. (and thanks for your review on my collaboration!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked this story! There is an epilogue coming up... so wait for that! And also, thank you so much for all your lovely reviews! ;)
Date: January 04, 2010 12:37 pm Title: Memories that Fade
Awwwww... Good ending, but I don't want it to be over.
Author's Response: It's not over just yet! There will be a short epilogue coming your way. (Soon I hope) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2010 11:58 am Title: Memories that Fade
Oh man, I'm am crying now for two reasons: because that was an incredible ending to an incredible story and because I'm so sad it's over. This was one of very few stories that I literally jumped out of my chair whenever I saw an update. And I almost forgot about it because it's been so long...but this, wow. What a way to end an such a terrific story. I never would have except that but it made so much sense. And everything you write makes perfect sense to me, something I hardly find in fanfictions.
You are an outstanding writer and this story was in my top 3 fanfictions of all time...can't wait to read more from you hopefully soon :)
Author's Response: Aww... Don't cry! If it makes you feel a little better, there's an epilogue to it. Hopefully I'll be posting it soon! I'm so glad you liked this story. And I'm really flattered by your lovely review! *blushing* I wasn't sure about it in the beginning, but I guess it worked out well! If a story strikes me again, I'll be definitely writing! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! =)
Date: January 04, 2010 05:23 am Title: Jelly Beans
Argh. Kenny was the cause of it all. I did not see that coming. /Pam I'm a sucker for a happy ending, and this sure delivered.
Author's Response: I love happy endings too! I love all that is fluff! Haha! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! =)