Date: January 31, 2010 12:22 am Title: Reunion Under the Spray
you totally should add more chapter =D
Author's Response: I'm so so sorry that I never replied to your review! The review response feature seems to be broken (but that's not an excuse at all!) - I should be paying more attention to my stories! Anyways, plan on adding more to all of my stories this summer when I'm off school - and before I have to start back up again. Thanks so much for leaving me a review, you gave me a great reminder to keep going!
8 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2009 09:09 am Title: Reunion Under the Spray
I really liked how you used very little words but still managed to get the scenario and the feelings across. It would be great if you continue since there's so many possibilities with Pam's time at Pratt. *whisper* phone sex! That's all I'm saying ;o)
Also, I noticed in your little blurb about yourself that you're from Seattle! Yay! A fellow Seattleite!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for you comments, that was really inspiring to keep going. I was pretty stuck with where the story was headed, and that's a great idea! I'll see if I can get something to work around that idea. Go Seattleite's! Thanks again!
Date: July 09, 2009 03:55 am Title: Reunion Under the Spray
Very nice...very evocative! Keep going!
Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! makes my day. i'll update as soon as i can come up with a new idea - any suggestions?
7 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2009 09:37 pm Title: Reunion Under the Spray
I don't usually enjoy stage directiony type stuff, but that was very cute. I love Pam at Pratt stories, so you should totes write more!
Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed the story, it was different for me, too. and yes, pam at pratt stories are great!rnrnif you have any ideas for future chapters, i'd love to hear them! (currently i'm pretty stumped...)
Date: July 07, 2009 09:32 pm Title: Reunion Under the Spray
If anything was wrong with it, it was too short! I love the fluff and the love and I love the idea that there was so much angst between them it's impossible to talk it out so the only way to get over it is to...well...'be' with each other. Good stuff! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Jess! I'm really glad you liked it - it was so spur of the moment. Unfortunately I'm out of ideas of how to continue it, so if you can think of anything I'd be happy to hear it. Thanks again!
8 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Reunion Under the Spray
Very nice! Short and sweet. Good work!
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, makes my day!
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2009 08:17 pm Title: Reunion Under the Spray
Since I'm working on my Pam at Pratt story right now, this was awesomely inspiring! :D
Really lovely :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that helped. I've run out of ideas, thought, so if you have any suggestions, I'm all ears! Thanks again!
Date: July 07, 2009 07:39 pm Title: Reunion Under the Spray
This is really well writen! Wow... I love Jim and Pam just happy and in love... sigh.. Great job!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the story! It feels so good to have such great revies! And you are so right, there's nothing that hits the spot more than a great JAM story. If you have any ideas of how I could continue this, I'd love to hear them, I'm stumped. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! (btw, i love your work!)