Date: January 19, 2010 11:16 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
i juts saw the wedding episode again so this was perfect
wow that was so steamy and romantic, luv it. i have to remeber to go there next time i go to cancun, and take someone with me of course =/.
u need to write more fics amiga, they are great!
im guessing you dont have the letter ñ that why u wrote cabana and not cabaña, rigth? it doesnt matter its still fabulouse.
Author's Response: *squeeee* Me encanta "Niagara" mucho!! Chica, you are so money! Una vez mas, muchas gracias para el review. Tulum estaba muy bonita y no muchas personas :D Muy tranquil. And definitely take alguien contigo. More romantic ;o) Ahora quiero ir alli otra vez. *Muchos abrazos*
Date: October 24, 2009 08:04 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Now I need a cancun getaway.
Author's Response: No...thank YOU, emhunter, for reading and the lovely review. Here's to hoping you'll get that Cancun getaway, preferably with a Jim ;o)
Date: August 06, 2009 06:10 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
i loved it, with one (actually, two) exceptions: both times when you used the term "fucked"... it just doesn't fit with the mood of the rest of the story... in fact, it's pretty jarring.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, Flonkerton! I apologize about the fact that I used the explicit language this story and that it was jarring for you. It was a struggled when I wrote whether or not to include the "f" word but I thought that sometimes Jim and Pam lovemaking is probably dirty so I used those words. But I understand what you mean. Thanks for letting me know :o)
Date: July 12, 2009 09:25 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
Wow! Now I have to go take a cold shower!
Author's Response: Hahaha....Thank you so much SkeetShruting! I apologize about the cold shower. Don't you have hot water ;o) Kidding :o) Seriously though, thank you for the fun review!
Date: July 10, 2009 09:43 am Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
Nice going, tootsie! ::presents celebratory frappucino:: I enjoy this fic so much because it makes me feel like I'm on vacation (albeit a vacation much hotter than the ones that I usually take). Your descriptions of the resort, etc. are beautiful.
Now, to my favorite lines: Jim was her place. Their love, her compass. BIG BIG sigh. Also: Looking over her shoulder at him, she walked toward the water, a siren luring him to sea. What a fantastic image!
Another great one. Happy to be along for the ride :)
Author's Response: ::slurping frappuncino:: Thanks Nan! You are just the sweetest! I forgive you for the Max Brenner thing ;o) Seriously thought, thank you so much for your advice, suggestions, AND the review (even though you read it so many times already!) rnrnAnd I agree, even though I was there, it was no where near as hot as the one Jim and Pam took ;o)
Date: July 09, 2009 11:14 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
That was pretty Hot-tastic. I can't be sure, but I think Jim likes black bikinis. ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Lovefool! I like that word, Hot-tastic ;o) I think you're right about Jim. LOL!
Date: July 09, 2009 06:57 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
Nice work! I loved the detail and beautiful settings. The picture at the end were a nice touch!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Dwangie! I'm so happy you enjoyed both the story and the pictures!
Date: July 09, 2009 04:59 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
That was SO hot and freaking cute at the same time. I love how he took her away some place isolated and romantic... guh hot x a million. You need to write more!!!
Author's Response: Sally, you are such a sweetheart, you know that? Thank you for the review and very encouraging words. Tulum was quite isolated & romantic so I figured Jim and Pam would like it too ;o)
Date: July 09, 2009 04:01 pm Title: Itty Bitty Black Bikini
Well, that certainly got the blood boiling...nice! And, I sort of like "impetuous" Jim...and I kinda think Pam does too!
Author's Response: Thank you Mr. Bill! I think you're right about Pam liking "impetuous" Jim :o)