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Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2009 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is fabulous. I loved the way you built in her thinking she was pregnant as part of the rationale for why she told Roy about her kiss with Jim.  And of course I adored that last snippet when she wasn't pregnant because well...she had been. :-) Great!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2009 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome twist on Company Picnic, nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2009 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

this was great! I have to admit, I wasn't super enticed by the premise--no offense to you, I just enjoy the show more when Jim and Pam are miserable and the pregnancy made them happy....anyways, I lovedlovedloved this fic. I thought that 3 was really a great back story/explanation and that 5 was really creative :)

Author's Response: I just love Jim/Pam in general. Fluff is always good, but I do enjoy the angst too - Maybe next time. but I'm glad you read it even if the premise wasn't such an enticement :) Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2009 09:12 am Title: Chapter 1

So, so, so adorable! So original and very angsty at first (but I love angst). Great work!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2009 08:20 am Title: Chapter 1

So beautiful, I almost teared up with #4 because I could really see that happening and how sad they would be. #5 actually surprised me, I wasn't sure how "not pregnant" was going to be a happy ending, but you did it :)
P.S. It's really cool how you managed to pull it off, with just Roy and Jim. Usually these '5 times' have some other guy involved and I just can't see Pam doing something like that.

Author's Response: I agree - I don't think Pam has been with anyone else, but with over 10 years of sexual activity (if she lost it at 18), that's more than enough for 5 short pregnancy scares/hopes. Thanks for the review!

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