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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2009 04:06 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981

OMG "He got very quiet, and then told me that he would never, ever become a hunter because a hunter could shoot a deer that was someone's mom and not even know it."

That was so cute. Cute little Jimmy :(

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I really appreciate the review.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2009 04:01 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

Very cute :)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2009 09:20 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981

My eyes started to tear up as I read about Jim being sad over the man shooting Bambi's Mom.  Poor Jim. Poor Bambi's Mom.  I'm glad he watched Jungle Book next and not Old Yeller.

Author's Response: Oh man, I don't think I know anyone who doesn't turn into a wreck over Old Yeller. He definitely needed a happy movie. Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2009 04:32 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981

haha. love that last visual image of jim singing bare necessities...even if he is supposed to be younger. haha

Author's Response: Haha, me too. Bare Necessities is such a happy song for someone too sing. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2009 12:47 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

Little Jim singing Bear Necessities is the cutest thing ever!

Author's Response: I thought so too! It's such a cute song. I'm glad you like the story!

Reviewer: Liv Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2009 12:08 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981

Aww I could totally see Jim crying over Bambi :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah he's a cutie. Glad you like the story! =)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2009 09:09 am Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981

I really like the concept of this. I think it would be beneficial to think about trying to putmore "you" into the story you just seem kind of disconnected from it. overally I love jimmy and can't wait to hear more!!

Author's Response: That's a really good idea. I'll try to think about that more for the next update. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2009 09:01 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

What a great idea for a story! I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: There should be an update in the next couple of days. I'm very happy that you like it, and I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2009 05:24 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

i love hearing things from different people's perspectives, especailly those rare characters like larissa. can't wait for more =]

Author's Response: There will be more soon, I promise! I'm glad you like it, though, thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: Liv Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2009 04:24 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

Really cool, interesting concept :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the feedback and I'll have another chapter up soon.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2009 11:11 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

sounds great, this really was a great chapter, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2009 10:11 pm Title: March 18th, 1978

aww, so cute. i think this is the first story i've ever read set from jim's parents pov, i like it. though i must admit i thought it was michael scott being referred to at the beginning! anyway, this is very well written, i can tell that this is an older person, or one from a older time period, great job with that, and i can't wait for more chapters! it would be great if they were a little longer too!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I realized that I probably should have picked a different name for Jim's father but I was drawing a blank. There will be more chapters soon, and I'll keep in mind what you said about being longer.

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