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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2020 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1

This manages to be both adorable and hilarious.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I remember having a lot of fun writing this one. I'm so pleased that you came across it! Thank you for taking the time to comment, it made my day. 

Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2018 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Man, each of these could have played out this way, but I'm having a tough time picking out a favorite. I DO like Pam not-so-sneakily sending him the wedding invite and her plus one offer. I love the dynamic where Jim and Pam know about Dwangela but are respectful-ish (sort of) of it. :) Well done!

Author's Response: I am very much enjoying your tour through my back catalog! ;) Yeah, I had fun with this one-- because it was going to be fun however it played out. I miss them, don't you? Thanks for the sweet comment!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2009 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1

These are fabulous. I especially liked this - it is a very believable scenario:
Hi. I know this is going to be awkward and I know I don't deserve anything from you, but I need to tell you something. I..." her voice faltered. She licked her lips and started again. "I just want to tell you that Dwight and Angela are secretly dating. I think they are having sex. Do with that information what you will."

She was more than halfway back to her desk when he started laughing hysterically. Of course he still loved her. He always would.

And Pam's little wedding present to Jim. Perfection.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the way they actually did the reveal, too, but I had a good time speculating about it once upon a time. Sorry for the late response- my notifications don't work and I hadn't checked for a while! Thank you, again!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my god, I can't say which one of these I loved the most. It was a amazing combination of Dwight/Angela and Jim/Pam and just awesome goodness and laughing!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year!

Reviewer: tigger Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2007 05:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Ok, SERIOUSLY, what IS the secret? I really like part one when Jim decided to just screw it and call Pam; neat vocalisation there. Also, what a nice, angst-free way for Jim and Pam to get together. I don't think I appreciated it as much as I could, cause I'm a real angst puppy and so much fluff and healthy behaviour as in this one is kinda lost on me... Stil, surely we Jim and Pam DO get together, I'll be able to reread and enjoy it properly.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks! I tend to alternate between fluff and angst, myself. But Jim finding out about Dwight and Angela was just too funny to resist!

Reviewer: belsum Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2006 10:32 am Title: Chapter 1

This list format really suits your short short story tendencies.  More please!

George Martin?  Hee!

I think Jim loosing his appetite at the B&B has to be my fave.



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! I just have to accept that I'm never going to be writing anything epic (unless I can dole it out at less than 1,000 words at a time!).

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2006 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1

This was so cute and fun- very in character. I think I liked #2 and #4 the best. Great job!

Author's Response:

I love "in character" as a review; you have no idea how happy that makes me. Thank you!

Reviewer: Token Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2006 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

wonderful and so very sweet!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm late to the party but I just adore this list. I hope you get better but on the other hand if a fever helps you to keep making Jam-centric lists like this one.... NO! Just feel better!

Author's Response: All my fic is Jammy, for the most part. :) Thanks for the get-well wishes. I really am very sick, but I'm glad it didn't ruin my stories!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 11:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I can't decide which is my favorite...thanks for all of them!

Author's Response:

You're too sweet. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: the_chosen_one00 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think that was really good. Definately one of the more creative JAM things I've ever read. Sorry your sick, but if that's how you write when you don't feel well, I would love to read some of your stuff while you are well. If you want, my e-mail is Just2hearyoubreathing@yahoo.com

Author's Response: THanks! There are about 16 examples of my non-sick ramblings on this very site. Enjoy!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was so good.  And with a fever, no less!  You are amazing.  Great job!!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! You're too sweet.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww...  You kill me with the cute and the sweetness.  I loved this story. :)


Author's Response: Hey, now- just because I feel like I'm dying doesn't mean I want to pass it along! Hee. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Dashdashdot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE this! So many serious Jim and Pam fics out recently, this really made me happy. So in character. Nice job!

Author's Response: We all need some fluff now and then! I'm so pleased you thought it was in-character; sometimes I worry about that.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is priceless.  I especially love #4, because it involves Dwight and Angela getting married, and Pam taking the first step herself.

Author's Response: Thank you! Pam really does need to step it up, doesn't she?

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

What fun! I, like almost everyone else, love the 5-things theme, and this one was a perfect addition to the category. My favourite was number two.

Author's Response: Thank you! It was a great exercise in thinking of multiple ways to approach the same event. Fun, fun, fun.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is adorable, lis!  I can't even pick a favorite -- I love them all.


Author's Response: Thanks! They're all my babies so I love them all equally, too. :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, man, it maskes me giggle to think what effect the secret in #5 is going to have on the immediate proceedings! May douse the fires, so to speak :)  I love these, love that Pam is involved in all five. Each one is a perfect capsule moment.

Author's Response:

I imagine any fire-dousing would only be temporary, right? Hee.

At this point, I don't think I could write a jam-free fic if I tried- especially not when I'm sick! Thank you, as usual, for your kind words!

Reviewer: Supervixen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Number five totally cracked me up:D



Author's Response: For this couple, even "happily ever after" is going to have some wicked humor, don't you think? I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fevers definitely don't slow you down - loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I wasn't sure if they were funny or sappy or neither...glad you liked them, regardless!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved them all.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Even when sick you write the absolute best stories!!!  I think #2 and #3 were my favorites!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Nice reviews make me feel better. Hee!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hee! This was very cute and fun. I think I love the last two the most, though Pam probably could have chosen a better time before that to tell him! It's adorable, but I bet Jim would prefer to just kiss her ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think Pam can have a wicked sense of humor- or maybe I'm just mean like that. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Funny and sweet and clever - the ideal mix for a JAM-aholic forced to go cold turkey (or at least be very patient with the show.) Thanks for this lovely treat.



Author's Response: I am unspoiled, but I truly believe our patience will be rewarded. In the meantime, there's always fluffy fic! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heeeee...I loved this! Your fever-induced fluffy JAM visions were really fun to read.

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you! I had fun writing them.

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