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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2020 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

You hear this at every other wedding, and it still gets me every time - and then you manage to bring new life to it with these little glimpses of Jam! I really liked Jim acknowledging that, yes, the house thing was a misstep no matter how well she chose to receive it, and I *adore* the fact that the note from The Job was her something old. Instant and permanent headcanon.

I know what you mean about having to make the time to dig back into the show - there are so many cool concepts for fic that are complicated by the fact that you have to watch, you know, 30 hours of television to get started on them. Here's hoping you're able to carve out the time!

Author's Response: Thank you! They are such great characters. Deeply flawed, but with the kind of love that I aspire to. 


I’m starting to get the itch to write, it’s true!

Reviewer: Ladama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2016 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is already so beautiful by itself, but it's even further enhanced by the fact that TPTB used this same passage for that amazing S9 "Paper Airplane" scene! (maybe a writer saw this and was influenced, who knows?)

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I'm glad you found and enjoyed this old story. I miss these two, don't you? 

Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2016 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Just beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you! 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2009 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dammit. How do you do this? Make me so damn happy and just completely in love with these fictional characters it hurts and its great and happy and....i think i have tears in my eyes. its just... they got MARRIED. she's PREGNANT. its... wonderful

Author's Response: Thank you. They are Wonderful. I'm just lucky to have them to inspire me.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2009 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

well too bad the writing partner idea doesn't work - i don't think i'll be posting something myself unless i get some brilliant idea - maybe tonight will spark some creative juices? good luck with your schedule, and i hope you have a chance to watch the wedding!

Author's Response:

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2009 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh how wonderful to see something new from you...and something so lovely and touching.  The something old? Man, that was perfect! Thanks for this!


Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It feels good to write, especially on the eve of such a momentous occasion. They're GETTING MARRIED! My heart is full of squee. Thank you so much for reading and commenting- you know I adore that!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2009 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  This was even more poignant on the second read-through.  Still, the "something old" being that note tucked into her garter is what got me yet again.  And then I had to hold back the tears.  How many hours left?

Author's Response: Soon! Oh, thank you. I always love your comments because you have a unique perspective, having seen the work already. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's funny - every wedding I've ever been to has used this passage to the point where sometimes, it loses its meaning on me. But this just brought it back home because if any couple epitomises this kind of love - it's these guys! This is so sweet and so romantic and *sniff* so lovely *sniff*.
I'm not crying! I'm not! I honestly don't think I will ever be this emotional for another real life wedding. Including my own...;) Thank you for this :)

Author's Response:

It really is a lovely verse, and basically impossible to really live up to! I think they do have this sort of relationship, though- I'm glad that came through for you! Thank you for your sweet words about my little story! Enjoy the wedding!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's funny, because I had just re-read your other story, I Could Marry A Girl Like that, and it gave me such goosebumps and got me all pumped for tomorrow night.  And then - like, an hour later, you posted this little number.  Love this. Love this. Love this.  Just a perfect little nugget in anticipation for Thursday.  Thank you!!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, really? I'm so excited that you went back to that one. I am very fond of it, and of course it is relevant on Wedding Eve. And thank you for reading this one, too- love you, love you, love you! :)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

no problem, great job with this! will you be continuing? just an idea here, no need to use it but maybe you could continue with drabbles from the wedding after we watch the episode tomorrow night. if you're up for that maybe we could team up and write something about it? i've only written one story here and i'm not very proud of it, i'd love to post something new. just a thought, but let me know what you think!

Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much for wanting to write with me! I'll be honest, I'm a terrible writing partner. My schedule is really crazy (busy work and a very active toddler)- I'm not even sure when I'll be able to watch the episode. I'd be happy to beta for you sometime, though, if you decide to write something more yourself. Thank you again!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

i will be brutally honest with you here. normally i can't stand the 55 word drabbles but this was absolutely perfect! i loved how you evenly showed both jim and pam's sides, and how the words seemed to effortlessly pair together. great job!

Author's Response: If that's brutal, I'll take it! Truly, I really appreciate you reading something in a format you normally dislike. Thank you for your kind words!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

*melts*  My husband & I (like half the world, apparently) chose this reading too -- because at Mass one day, the pastor told us 'substitute the name of your partner for the word Love'.  Hubby thinks it's terribly funny to say things like 'Lisa is patient'.  Oh well, we laugh at the same things, it keeps us together.

Meanwhile, back to you -- this is made of awesome.  Just what I need to hold me over for another day.



Author's Response: That was sort of my idea- Jim is patient, Pam is kind, and then I got carried away and did most of the verse! I'm pleased that you like it; I always love your comments! Thank you as always!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

This?  Beautiful.  And perfect.  Thank you so much for sharing on the eve of the wedding.


Author's Response: I'd be happy with "beautiful" or "perfect"- thank you for both!

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh man this was just awesome. Close to about how awesome tomorow night will be! Lovely job as usually nqlllisi!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I love to hear from repeat customers- it makes it even more fun to keep writing!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow. I guess that answers the question of whether I'll cry tomorrow night. Like EH, it was the note in the garter that got me in the innards. Beautiful. Just went I didn't think I could get any more excited about this...

Author's Response: I'm so excited too! sorry about your innards, though! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot!

Reviewer: Katie J Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent - Thank you :) This has made me even more excited if that's possible - I've got a huge grin on my face now!

Author's Response: I'm so pleased to make you smile! Thank you.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was amazing. I got chills reading this. Instant favorite. Wonderful really, really wonderful! I absolutely cannot wait until tomorrow!

Author's Response: I love the "chills" vote, that means I really hit something emotionally resonant. And these two hit me like that ALL THE TIME. I love them. I can't wait either! Thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  Fantastic.  I'm in tears already, whoa.  The little bit about her tucking the memo into her garter was my undoing.  Thanks so much for this prenuptial treat, dear!


Author's Response: Oh, sorry about the tears (mostly!). Thank you so much for liking my story. I love them and am so excited (and I love that verse- it was read at my wedding and always chokes me up). Thanks, again!

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

beautiful. thanks for sharing this before tomorrow happens. =)

Author's Response: I'm not sure my boss would be impressed by how hard I tried to get this done before tomorrow happens! Ha!  Seriously, thank you. I am very glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2009 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guh.  How did you do this?!  It's so lovely, nqllisi, and gets me even more excited for tomorrow's ep.  Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you, NanReg. I don't have a chance to write fic much these days, so I'm always worried that I've lost the knack. You make me feel better. And I, too, am SO EXCITED! They're getting married!!

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