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Reviewer: OfficeLady Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2012 05:18 pm Title: The Job - Money

This story popped up and I want you to know how much I enjoyed this little journey back to the early days of Jim and Pam after The Job. So romantic....so Jim and Pam. You should write more......

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 05, 2010 10:06 pm Title: The Job - Money

*knock knock*

I miss this story :)

Author's Response: I'm trying H_H.  I'm really hoping to get back to it!!  Thanks so much for the nudge!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21, 2009 05:13 am Title: The Job - Money

Simple, sweet, and perfect- like a diamond solitaire.

Author's Response: And so are you. :)  Thank you lis!!! 

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2009 10:17 am Title: The Job - Money

I've been thinking of this timeframe lately, xoxoxo.  Loved this, these early days.  They're soo romantic.  I really can't wait to read more.  Oh, and it's so nice to actually have stories to read again!

Author's Response: I'm trying to add on - but it's tough to get my mind back there.  I'll keep working on it!!!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2009 07:46 pm Title: The Job - Money

so cute. love this =]

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2009 04:43 pm Title: The Job - Money

Love this part: Before she used to think she was simply too needy, but it turns out she only needed one thing.

There isn't enough written post S3-pre S4.  And there certainly isn't enough from you.  I would love to read more of this ;o)



Author's Response: I would love to write more of it.  I'm too focused on baby things to get back to it but I promise to try again soon!!!

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2009 10:29 am Title: The Job - Money

haha, i definitely find old things all the time on my hard drive. this was great! dig deeper, find us some more treats, eh? =)

Author's Response: I shall try. :)  Thanks yanana!

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2009 07:14 am Title: The Job - Money

xoxoxo, i am always so excited to see something posted by you and this was no exception! gorgeous. please keep going! i think you should dig around on your hard drive more often :)

Author's Response:

kaat - you are very sweet.  And we'll see if there's anything else lurking!!  Thank you so much.

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 11:47 pm Title: The Job - Money

oww its really cute i like it. i always enjoy reading fics episode related

Author's Response: Thanks so much dmdb!

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 11:36 pm Title: The Job - Money

My dear xoxoxo, what a lovely thing to discover in your digital Christmas stocking. I can never get enough of the early days of Jim and Pam's relationship, probably because we didn't get to see it on the show. There are so many ways to go with it, and I really liked your choices here. Short and sweet. You've still got it.

For what it's worth, I don't think I've read this before, and I've read all of your stuff. Hmm.

Author's Response: Thank you dear Blanca.  Me either.  Someone should write a fic about the early days soon. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 09:26 pm Title: The Job - Money

Guh, love me some early Jim and Pam. This was great, definitely looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Me too.  Hopefully I can find the inspiration to add to this soon!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 04:19 pm Title: The Job - Money

wow, that was beautiful, nice job seamlessly flowing through such a large part of their relationship in snippets - i didn't even realize that was the title until i had written that word!

i also loved the way you didn't use their names or have the story come from a certain perspective. i was very impressed at how you didn't slip at all! i especially liked the first part, as it seemed to have the most content, the rest were not as great, excluding the final part at dwight's home.

my only critique, i saw a couple of spelling mistakes - and i'm having a hard time relocating them, but there were i think two of them in the same paragraph - if you find them and fix them you'll be all set!

great job!

Author's Response: Thanks pmh!  I'd like to do more of these but the mood hasn't hit me quite yet.  Also - thanks for the tip on the typos.  Sometimes I catch them after I post - but I appreciate your letting me know. 

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 02:36 pm Title: The Job - Money

i'm pretty sure i've seen this before.... either that, or i have a really bad case of deja vu

Author's Response:

Really??  I looked through everything I've posted here and I couldn't find it anywhere.  I didn't write a lot of S4 fic and most of my stuff was speculative future fluff.  If you figure out where you've seen it before just let me know.

Another reason I was pretty sure I hadn't posted it is that it was unfinished.  But still - let me know!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2009 12:37 pm Title: The Job - Money

Instant favorite! What else you have on that hard drive? LOL! This was really great, so well written, so sweet, and so vivid. I love it! Hope you do continue!

Author's Response: Who knows!!  I'll keep looking!  Thanks Deeldee!

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