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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2010 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sweet and romantic. I love that the last tap, tap, tap is to the baby.

Reviewer: Annabel Winslow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2010 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

The opening line of this is so gorgeous and lyrical, I had to read it about five times.  Actually, that whole first paragraph is amazing.  

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2010 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Just wanted you to know, unfold, that I haven't been able to get this out of my head.  Not a bad thing ; )

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2010 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful.  I love your stories - always so quietly romantic - even, oddly enough, your angsty ones.  Well done, and nice to see something new from you.  

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2010 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is one of the most intimate things I have ever read between them.  A masterpiece!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2010 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Unfold, this literally gave me chills. It's gorgeously romantic. What a wonderful idea for a fic. Thank you for sharing! ::adds to favorites::

Reviewer: Freckleface Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2010 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely adorable. I love the tapping detail, it really sounds like something they would do, another little secret language they might share. What adorable fluffiness!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2009 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. Something totally new and different.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2009 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was beautiful, I love how this all revolves around the heartbeat. What a sweet idea, and this really worked having so much of their relationship revolve around one aspect. Great job!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2009 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Pat pat pat.

Reviewer: ItsOnlyMeredith Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2009 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1

"No, actually, my heart is fine now."

*sigh* So beautiful and sweet. Excellent writing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31, 2009 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes, Jim should marry her twice every day. That makes me smile so much my face could burst.

Nicely done, unfold  ;o)

 

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2009 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Don't know. Nervous habit. Um, I guess it's like if I can tap my finger as fast as my heart's going, then my heart's not going to explode or burst out of my ribcage or anything. Weird, right?"

 

Um...are you serious right now?  That's officially the most romantic thing Jim has ever said in a fanfic. WOW.

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2009 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

ugh, this made me melt. beautiful job, as always, unfold. :)

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