Reviews For First Date
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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2010 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute! I like this pairing. One formatting note- your story is smashed up into your Story Notes, so it is really hard to see where it starts. I always try to put some lines in between, and maybe repeat the story title in bold, to avoid that problem. Nice job with the actual writing, though!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Also, thank you for telling me about that problem. I tried to fix it, but I guess that didn't work.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2010 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

O/A would be great together, huh? I've thought so ever since they hung out in Montreal(?) together. I think there are too many office romances on the show, but O/A and much more believable than Andy/Erin, IMO

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I agree with you so much.

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