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Reviewer: Jamfan2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2013 11:28 am Title: di Mama get chob?

This is so good. Don't give up!

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14, 2010 11:44 pm Title: di Mama get chob?

im intrige...i what to know what happens next..like who is the father??? roy?

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2010 05:48 pm Title: prologue

This is very promising.  I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2010 05:06 pm Title: prologue

After reading the second chapter, I decided to come back and review. Interesting start and now - after seeing part two I LOVE what you're doing :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2010 04:06 pm Title: di Mama get chob?

That was VERY cute. I adore Molly and I cannot wait to see how Jim interacts with her and Pam once Pam starts work.

Michael wasn't bad, you're being too hard on yourself. If you're worried about writing him, get a beta, they really help. But seriously thta was VERY cute. I cannot wait for the next part!!

Reviewer: drewbers Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04, 2010 09:28 am Title: prologue

So is Pam on her own?No Jim? Interesting start, will look forward to update and where this is going.

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2010 06:50 pm Title: prologue

I'll be very interested to see where this one goes. Good luck!

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