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Reviewer: floppyhair Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2010 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved the idea of Jim and Dwight being related! It was a great story, although your writing came off a little choppy at times. But keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you thought it was a great story, despite the choppiness at times.

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