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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2010 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Steph, this was so good, as your stories always are.  Poor, poor Toby.  I have to admit that I kept waiting for that happy ending, but that's just not Toby. 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's difficult to write happy endings for Toby but I keep trying...

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2010 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was heartbreakingly sad. Poor, poor Toby.

Author's Response: Thank you! Heartbreakingly sad and Toby just go together.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2010 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that morning after was just a kick in the gut.  And poor Toby seemed to be doing so well in the night.  This was really well written!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2010 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, poor Toby. He never gets a break. :(
Great job :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree. Poor guy.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2010 04:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh Steph, you always make me feel so for Toby. I could just see the look on Kelly's face the morning after. Poor Toby, he needs someone - surely there's somebody out there for him, too. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I do agree with you about poor Toby. I think there is someone out there for him. Maybe Pam should stop setting her friends up with Michael and throw one Toby's way.

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