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Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2010 09:17 am Title: Sunshine

Have to chime in with my love for this line especially: "We'll have to convince her that people are making a documentary about her"...
Very realistic scenario.

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2010 10:03 pm Title: Sunshine

So happy to see something new from you. Enjoyed this one from beginning to end.

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2010 06:12 am Title: Sunshine

I'm not a big fan of the super fluffy, baby, parent fics, but this was flawless. Having your name attached makes it so much better! True mom right here: “No,” she says. “I’ve passed through the Happy phase, and I’ve entered Paranoia. Why isn’t she awake?”

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 10:28 pm Title: Sunshine

Gosh I love it when you write.  "We'll have to convince her that people are making a documentary about her"...perfect. This is just the ride blend of light-hearted and realistic. 

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 07:20 pm Title: Sunshine

You finely captured the joy and paranoia about a child that sleeps in.  Sweet, horrible freedom!  This was a pleasure to read :)

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 11:25 am Title: Sunshine

Aw! This is so cute. I love how excited they are that she slept so long. I can't really relate to it, but it definitely seems like a big thing for a baby to do. I hope to read more stories from you soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 07:43 am Title: Sunshine

Annabel!  How amazing of you to make an appearance at my surprise party!  If you know even a little about my history as an Annabel Winslow fan, I'm sure you figured out that you could re-write the phonebook and I would love it, because you would make it that much better :D  Seriously, this was so yummy.  It takes me back to the early days of my own beetle and that first night sleeping through.  Seems like yesterday, but it's so not.  I love the banter between these two.  So funny and sweet.  Her body surprises her sometimes.  It’s still slack in places, but it’s nearly hers again: the shape and contours she remembers.  And when they do this, when he touches her this way, any leftover self-consciousness evaporates.  She is just Pam.  So, so good.  Thank you again for this lovely birthday gift.  It means so much.  xo

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 03:02 am Title: Sunshine

Oh...the "documentary" line...somehow slyly clever....I laughed out loud.  Very nice!

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 10:52 pm Title: Sunshine

Awwww....this is simply lovely and funny at the same time. A little slice of life inside the Halperts' home complete with some sexytime.

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 08:18 pm Title: Sunshine

“Such awesome sleeping!” says Jim.

I just loved that line - totally a Jim thing to say. Very cute and I loved how the reader was able to experience every aspect of Jim and Pam's new life. Great job, Annabel Winslow!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 07:17 pm Title: Sunshine

“We convince her that people are making a documentary about her,” says Jim. “Or… we could stop worrying and be opportunists.” < like the Truman show?

That was soooo cute. I loved it!!!

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