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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2020 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, man. The fact that this sort of moment is something that would haunt them long after they were well established as a happy couple is so real, and this seems like a, hmm, healthy way to work through it.

Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 25, 2018 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Gah! I always think I'm not going to like "sex in the office" stories, but it's the stories like this that prove my first reaction wrong. So good!

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2010 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

A unique twist on one of my favorite "Office" scenes ever. Nicely done, a very enjoyable read!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review jkfan! :)

Reviewer: more_awake Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27, 2010 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Not only was this insanely hot, it was also very distinctly Jim-and-Pam. If Jim were an actual person, I'm sure he would still remember that night as if it had just happened, and because he is a dude, he TOTALLY would have gone for the do-over like this. haha Leading up to that, though, the way you wrote him broke my heart (in a good way) and made me really remember Casino Night. And Pam's reassurances? Lovely. As for her playing along with his "game" and the periwinkle exchange.. those were great, too. And very them.

Thanks for sharing this with us. It's really awesome :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, more_awake! I'm so glad it came off as "them" and not so much "me" haha - I wanted to stay true to character, even though it might have been a little on the dramatic side. They come off as super close to perfect on the show, even when they are having a tiff, and sometimes I think everyone needs some reassurance :) I appreciate the review so much!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2010 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a shame your smut cherry is gone, I hope you NEVER find it mwahahaha.

What a great twist on that night. I think no matter how happy they are together, that night will stll haunt him. Awesome ficola :)

Author's Response: Hahaha thanks Hannah - Hopefully next time I can writing smut without blushing like a schoolgirl ;) lol

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26, 2010 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1

The smut cherry is gone forever, so you can stop looking :D  Congrats to you on this momentous occasion, stjoe, and thanks for breaking my afternoon boredom.  I'm going to try not to feel bitter that there's no Jim Halpert around my desk.  *sigh*

Author's Response: Aww damn... I wrote this with my eyes closed, so I was kind of hoping maybe it just slipped outside to play or something. Damn. Glad I broke the afternoon boredom ;) Thanks for the review!

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