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Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2023 07:31 pm Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

If only this had happened on the actual show! Would have saved us all a heap of pain! This was great, I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Maxine Abbott Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2020 11:03 am Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

What a lovely holiday treat. The juxtapositioning of the I’m sorry and don’t be in the two times they appear frame this piece so well and paint that perfect happy ending. Don’t know If you are still checking in for reviews but if you are... Thanks for sharing this sweet tale.

Author's Response: <3 thank you for your kind review! I’m glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2020 02:03 pm Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

Now, THIS would have been a good ending to the teapot Christmas.

Author's Response: Hahaha 😀

Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 12:05 pm Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

So sweet! I really like this take on what Jim wrote in the card.

Author's Response: Thank you! I have always wondered what he wrote. I think he’d go out of his way to just skirt the edge of telling her everything so he could still fall back on plausible deniability if she didn’t return his feelings, hence, what I wrote.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2019 01:14 pm Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

I like this version of this kind of revelation, particularly because it gives Pam more agency at this stage. Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2011 06:50 am Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

I really enjoyed this! I agree with andtheivy, the line "it's just ....self preservation" is perfect. I can hear that particular bit of truth coming right out of Jim's mouth. The important dialogue is sparse - very fitting for them during that time.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2010 06:55 am Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

Merry Christmas to all of us!  Nicely done!

I especially like your imagining of what Jim wrote in the card -- it sounds like him, not quite laying it all out on the line.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was exactly what I was going for: something he could always back away from if need be. He wasn't quite to the "lay it all out" place quite yet!

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2010 04:14 am Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

I think the line "It’s..it’s just...self preservation" is my favorite. This is a really lovely story that begins and ends quietly, leaving room for possibility. Of course I'd love to know what happens next, what sort of conversations they have, but it's also so well stopped where it is.

Author's Response: Thank you <3

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 23, 2010 11:46 am Title: Beautiful, Sweet, Engaged Pam

Excellent fic, Sarah.  I could envision this happening...and if only it had!  Really well done.  And was the "self-preservation" comment a nod to Love Actually? Love it :)



Author's Response: Thank you, lovely <3 it was not an intentional nod, but I'm sure that's what put it into my subconscious!

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