1 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2018 06:51 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
Oh, bravo! This story was a wonderful smut fest that tied beautifully into a little peak of an episode. I will NEVER be able to imagine anything different when I watch this episode. Well done!!
Date: April 30, 2011 11:10 am Title: My Baby Makes Me Smile; Lord, Don't She Make Me Smile
Crap, I just realized this was complete. I hope you are inspired to write more soon. Love this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2011 09:05 am Title: My Baby Makes Me Smile; Lord, Don't She Make Me Smile
Great wrap up on this! I loved this little story. We are so on the same wavelength with their conversations which is so cool, makes me feel like I'm not so far off with my own writings. I love their little quiet morning it seems so them, that the baby is daddy's girl is something I really think sounds so true to these two. This last Michael episode was so sad and I think you really hit it right about Pam being sad, which is why I really believe she left the office that afternoon. I loved this whole story a lot. The part I like best is them reminiscing, it's something I can see happening and I think it's so cool that we both think that Michael was sweet to Pam about her sadness over Jim leaving way back when. I laughed out loud when he said she has a fear of bisquit cans. So funny! Looking forward to reading more of your stories and hope you have an update on the way for your first date fic!!
Author's Response: I just read your story and I agree...we're definitely on the same wavelength! It must have been so hard for them to say goodbye to their friend. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this. And, no worries..."For the Love" will be updated soon. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2011 07:25 am Title: My Baby Makes Me Smile; Lord, Don't She Make Me Smile
That was sooooo beautiful, and made me sad all over again. But you know, Jim was right, this is Michael's chance to be happy *sobs*
Loved as usual :)
Author's Response: I know; I can't imagine the show without him. I actually cried during the scene where Pam watched his plane taking off. BUT, if he has to leave the show then I'm happy they chose the route they did. For all his cringe-worthy moments, Michael's a great person and he deserves his own chance at happiness.
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2011 05:20 am Title: My Baby Makes Me Smile; Lord, Don't She Make Me Smile
I keep trying to leave this a nice long review, but my effing iPad is cutting it off :( Let's just say that I loved it. Bravo!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Your reviews mean the world to me so I'm really glad you loved it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2011 11:34 am Title: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man
I have to say this is very S. P. I. C. Y!!
I do look forward the rest of this as well as more from your other story and this couples first summer together!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my stories.
Date: April 26, 2011 01:57 pm Title: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man
Ha! Just happened to read Deedldee's review, and we're on the same page (as we so often are) :D
Author's Response: <3
Date: April 26, 2011 01:56 pm Title: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man
Well obviously this is scorching hot, Tuna. As hot as it is, though, it's loving, too. I found this to be so touching: Since the last trimester of her pregnancy, she had become self-conscious about her body and rarely displayed herself so blatantly in the bright light of day. He found her beautiful, of course, and he thought the last few pounds of baby-weight that she’d retained had settled in all the right places but she often felt shy about revealing herself so completely and, wanting her to be comfortable, he rarely asked her to. He clearly loves her so much, and that's so beautiful. The love and trust makes the "smut" much more erotic IMHO. Still amazed that that little bit of this episode inspired such hotness :D
One last thing that I keep forgetting to mention: I hope you're feeling fully recovered from the flu!
Author's Response: Thank you, Nan! I'm really glad you enjoyed this. I was little nervous writing this because I didn't want it to just be smut for smut's sake so I'm really happy that the love come through. That was a great little moment in the episode; I know it's not in the nature of the show to reveal too many personal/home life moments, but my imagination runs wild every time they do. Unfortunately, the flu is still lingering but I'm slowly but surely recovering. Thank you for asking! That's very sweet of you.
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2011 11:03 am Title: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man
So excited that there's a second chapter! Will there be a third? I hope so! I like that in your universe they got back to what they were doing. Beyond the hot stuff (which by the way, you write the hell out of) the pure love that comes across in this chapter is really so beautiful. I'd be happy to read more about this 'nomination' day. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there will be one more chapter to wrap this up. I really wanted this story to be sweet and spicy so I'm really thrilled that it came off that way. And in my universe...Jim and Pam always get their happy ending. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2011 07:23 am Title: She Makes Me Glad I'm a Man
Mmmmm that was delightful and all kinds of delicious :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
Date: April 26, 2011 05:00 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
Well, that's what we were all pretty much thinking when Jim found Michael and Deangelo standing on his doorstep so bright and early in the morning...right? And of course, you certainly did one hell of a nice job filling in the blanks for us...so, thanks! Now, I think I'll just go and get that cold shower!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm still a little nervous about writing smut so I really appreciate the vote of confidence. Glad you liked this chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2011 12:19 pm Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
Wow-wee wow! That was hot. I love the tone you gave this, slow quiet early morning, how much they love each other. And you totally know that this is more or less what the show was implying with that cold open lol Loved this, and hope you have more things on the way including the next update to your other story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That was exactly the tone I was going for. And, yeah...the bed head, the agitated manner, the bellowed "stay in bed"...that was just a fanfic waiting to happen.
Date: April 25, 2011 08:15 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
Well you've done it again, another beautifully written story!!!! Cant get enough of you're writing....cant wait till you write another one!!!!
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: April 25, 2011 07:11 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
Whew! Sounds award-worthy to me ;) Jim Halpert is a multi-talented man. Leave it to Michael and his impeccable timing : D
In addition to the hotness, I really enjoyed your opening paragraph and this in particular: He heard the soft whirring of the ceiling fan and the heavy, snuffling breaths being transmitted over the baby monitor. Makes me think of when my son was a baby, the monitor making him sound very much like Darth Vadar :D Up until the loud knock, you captured the tranquil feel of a household asleep. Looking forward to what you have in store next and an update to that other story of yours...hint, hint...
Author's Response: For some reason baby monitors make the smallest of babies sound like giants. :) I'm glad you liked this. And don't worry...the next chapter of "For the Love" is already in the works.
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2011 07:28 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
LMAO Michael has such bad timing. That was hot, and alsovery sweet. Ic an totally imaging Pam snuggling up to him in her sleep, practicaly pushing him off the bed :)
The smut was great, damn you michael, no wonder Jim told her to stay in bed, he wanted to get back to what he was doing :)
Author's Response: Yep! That was my first thought when I heard him say that! ::Hangs head in shame.:: I have a dirty, dirty mind.
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2011 07:09 am Title: And When We Get Behind Closed Doors...
I think you just broke my brain! That was hot! Stupid, Michael, ruining everything! :)
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.