1 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2018 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this so much. I’ve read it a few times and I just love it again each time. I’m always astounded when writers can paint beautiful imagery with just a few words.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2011 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I so love when you give us these beautiful vignettes. You're writing is beyond words. Always full of feeling and warmth. Thank you for writing
Date: September 09, 2011 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
One little thing that I noticed upon re-read. I think you may have missed a word here--"give" maybe? She is suddenly very concerned that she is about to herself completely to this man, and she is ready but she is cautious.
Author's Response: Oops. Fixed. Thank youuu!
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2011 05:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Unfold, even though this is a little thing, every word means something. I could clearly envision the scene you set.
I am absolutely certain that you could even make a fast food menu sound sexy and romantic ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2011 05:21 am Title: Chapter 1
I heart your drabble so much :)