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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2018 08:38 am Title: Chapter 2

I found this in the random box and I really wish we got some more of it, or some Jim POV. Lovely work.

Reviewer: Northsider Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2012 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Good start to what seems like a fun AU take on Jim & Pam. I'm very interested to see what happens next and where you take them. One request, though: please, oh please don't pull an "Izzie/Denny"!

Reviewer: Vitamin-D Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2012 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start! Refreshing to see a proactive Pam. Hope you did not make our boy too sick. Just enough for a bit of angst maybe or perhaps a bit of hardship to be conquered by love! Cannot wait to see what you have in store for us.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2012 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Just a few things that threw me off. Pam's sister's name is Penny. And there were a few grammar things that could be fixed up by a beta, (I'd be happy to help you out). For ex.: a lot, not alot...
I think it's a fun concept to explore though, hope you'll continue. If you'd like some help it just send me an email -

Reviewer: MayorHaggar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2012 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

This was a pretty fun start. I look forward to more.

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