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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2020 01:59 am Title: Chapter 1

I always love the idea of her finding, for five seconds, just enough courage to get across the line here. This seems like a moment where that really would've been enough.

This is a version of Pam's question I don't think I've read before... and one she would 100% have noped out of asking when she saw the cameras. I *really* liked Jim making her make the first move - between her drunkenness and her being the one who has to make the change and consent issues, it just works.

It does seem fully realistic that having broken that barrier, it would become so much easier to go right ahead and break more. And you created some great lines out of it: "he thinks he might pass out from the electricity in her every touch." "It’s like nothing has changed, instead of everything."

I'm glad you decided to weigh in on this!

Author's Response: Wow, what a lovely, thoughtful review! I’m so glad you liked the story. I have always wondered what Pam would have said, here, and if she really had it in her to take that leap. I do think the show took her on a wonderful journey of self discovery and let her get to her brave moments when she was ready for them, but it’s fun to pretend :-)

Reviewer: rational Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2020 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Those damn cameras, ruining everything!

Author's Response: Srsly!

Reviewer: Clover Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2017 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This kind of leaves me on a cotton candy high! :) Very sweetly written! :)

Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1

This is perfect! I love it! And I'm so happy she didn't run off after she woke up, I'm all for happy jam!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! <3

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