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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 04:18 pm Title: The End and The Beginning

Sad for Karen but happy for Pam and Jim!

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 04:17 pm Title: A Beginning and An End

A good insight into their minds at this point of season three.

Reviewer: Invisiblecynic Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2022 05:58 am Title: A Beginning and An End

Complex emotions felt and described in such a scant number of words. Each time I've read this I've marveled at that fact. This is my little JAM palete cleanser!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2021 06:25 am Title: The End and The Beginning

I love the parallel construction on the two Pam pieces here!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2021 06:24 am Title: A Beginning and An End

These are all really strong, but I especially love this line of JIm's: "She's exactly what he needs right now. Maybe someday she'll also be what he wants." There are 10,000 word fics that don't capture Jim's feelings for Karen that well.

Reviewer: msteapot Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2017 07:39 am Title: A Beginning and An End

I am so impressed with what you managed to do with so few words! Amazing story -- I especially loved Karen's perspective! It was nice to have her insight

Author's Response: you wrote this forever ago but thanks so much for the comment! I've been liking my wordy multi-chapters lately but it's fun to take on something different and poses a challenge like a short world limit. And I'm a JAMmer 4 lyfe but I do enjoy writing from Karen's POV.

Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2017 04:31 pm Title: A Beginning and An End

Cool to see a story play out completely in so few words. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for posting this challenge! Sorry I didn't see it sooner (we sadly can't list the challenges by date so they can get lost in the shuffle...)

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2017 08:20 am Title: The End and The Beginning

Clever! I have no idea how people can convey a story, feelings and character interpretation in so little words... It was really good!

Author's Response: you left this review a while ago but thank you! it was a fun little challenge!

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