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Reviewer: Merria Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2018 02:52 am Title: Chapter 10

Looking forward to the new chapters

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2017 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

So, it seems like they are really getting to know each other pretty well at this point and are definitely comfortable with each other. They hang out out and talk all a lot, right? Are feelings developing at this point? I don't think it's really been mentioned or really hinted at yet. I must know what happens next! :D

Author's Response:

I did not see this until just now, I am so sorry! I have had writers block with this one for months, I have also lost the original thought that I had and I think I can make it better now that  I have more experience writing these two, so I am thinking of taking this summer to workshop it a bit and republish. I might finish where it's at right now, then workshop it. Who knows. Thank you for reading<3


Reviewer: Froggy101 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 05, 2017 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story and would appreciate it if you would continue it

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I do plan on continuing, just having a bit of writers block with it at the moment, and  I really hope the inspiration hits soon because I love writing it. Thank you for reading :) <3 

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Ooo... Interesting turn! This is very sweet I can't wait to see how you get them together:D

Author's Response: I'm also curious about which way the muse will lead me. I have a few ideas, it will be in the next few chapters I think. Thanks for reading :) <3

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27, 2017 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 7

I liked this.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading <3 I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2017 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 6

Me! I'm a dedicated reader :D I'm just a little behind on the recent stuff.

I totally thought Jim was going to invite Pam to the bday party so I'm definitely looking forward to the BBQ he's having :)

Angela still cracks me up!

I think you're doing great so far but a little more detail would be welcome.

Keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: I'm hoping that I can start writing a bit more often now that I am done with a very time consuming school project, so more chapters will be coming soon! Thanks again for reading<3

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2017 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

I think you have a good start so far! I like the idea of putting Pam at an art supply shop, and that even though she's closer to her field of interest, it's still retail and she still wants so much more. And Angela would totally get water at a bar then interrupt Jim and Pam. XD

I do have a few suggestions on the writing side of things, just some things I appreciated learning when I was a younger writer (way back in the day now ;-) ) but I'll refrain from posting here unless you don't mind, otherwise I'm happy to send them to you in a message ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I would love some suggestions, as the only real writing experience I have is essays for school, I don't mind you posting them here, or you can message me, on tumblr or otherwise (if you have another way) my url is dmthisis-pam. Again Thank you you so much for reading and the feedback<3

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2017 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 4

Lol! Oh Angela! This is sweet, I can't wait to see where you take this :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. I have some ideas, but I am also excited to see what I come up with:)

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2017 06:06 am Title: Chapter 3

This is so cute! I love alternate universe so I'm really excited that you're writing this! I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, for reading and for the lovely compliment!

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