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Reviewer: msteapot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2017 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Hi Moogie Man! Just realized I forgot to vote but you assumed correctly -- Pam tells the truth. Thanks for your compliment by the way

Author's Response: You not only have a talent for writing  but you seem to have a caring heart. Keep writing and your sincereness can balance out my cynicism. Don't give up on me!

Reviewer: msteapot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2017 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi Moogie Man! I was surprised to read Jim as so vulgar and aggressive — I don’t really see that in his character (I don’t think his jealousy is of a violent nature). Also, surprised about Pam. I know you like to write the Pam/Jim relationship in a bit of a struggling state, but I think the love between the two is very real.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. your opinion means a lot I assume you are voting for pam to tell the truth.  I still have to  write the ending after the votes are in.  If pam is honest, I think you will see a loving ending.  if the vote goes the other way, who knows.  My  challenge will be to write a believable ending, even if I don't like it.  By the way.  I thought you should have won the valentines contest.  Back to my  story,  my son likes my story, my girls don't.  Boy/girl thing. 

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2017 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Can you review your own work? How about a heated argument with yourself? A fist fight?

Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2017 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't see anyone in The Office as a physical type but this was a good story.

Vote: Pam tells Jim

Author's Response: Jim in real life (John Krasinski) is pretty buff.  Thanks for your vote.

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