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Reviewer: Vr1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04, 2017 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

What happened to the ending you submitted? Turned down? I've got 2 Pam/other story's on Archive of our own, I think they're pretty good, tell me what you think

Author's Response:

Yep,tutnred dowm

n by MTT Trying to get on AO3

Your stories are great, especially More like a week 

Reviewer: Vr1 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14, 2017 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see Dwight pull it off. I think at the beginning of season 3 Ryan definitely had a chance. I have a few ideas with other Office characters and Pam, and loved your hour in the life story,great premise

Author's Response: I  submitted a detailed story of ending A, which I think you will like.

Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cool premise, the Dwight dialogue is spot on!

Author's Response: Thanks. Will follow up with details about the encounter in the art room!

Reviewer: Vr1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2017 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ending A of course, but how does he put it off(pardon the pun)? Pam's not the type to fool around with just anyone,especially someone from work. What's Dwights plan? How does he make it happen? Is it spontaneous or does he have an elaborate plan that he pulls off? Was it in the bedroom? In the build up, Pam seems up for a little adventure, the question is how does Dwight pull off the transition to get in her pants I'm a huge fan of Pam/other smut, but most of them are unreadable because the premises are so unrealistic. Pam's character is quiet,pleasant and reserved, so for someone to get her into bed it almost needs to be a right time right place moment. And that's where a good build up is needed, and that's what you've done here..created a believable premise , so now we need the rest of the story on how Dwight got to screw Pam

Author's Response: You got it.  Give me a week!

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