Reviews For The Way He Looks
Reviewer: manidfk Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2017 10:36 am Title: The Way He Looks
Date: September 01, 2017 10:36 am Title: The Way He Looks
Great story! 'He paused.' was a good way to end it.
Author's Response: Thank you! My first 55 word attempt. Limiting verbosity is not one of my strengths as a writer, so it was an interesting challenge.
Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2017 07:02 am Title: The Way He Looks
Date: August 29, 2017 07:02 am Title: The Way He Looks
Yeah I can totally envision it taking place after Ben Franklin, but if you're going off cannon, this could totally work as a fight between Jim and Pam where they're heading towards a breakup! I love the ambiguity and how it could work on two levels; even the title works on two levels... You sneaky genius! :)
Author's Response: Haha thank you very much! I was definitely intending on getting them together, but I'm glad if it happens to go both ways.