Date: December 02, 2020 04:09 pm Title: In Which a Dessert is Almost, But Not Quite, Eaten
Honestly, there's a lot of just very funny writing in this chapter, and some fantastic remixes of canon. I love that Jim's diplomacy experience ends up coming back to help create the yogurt-is-expired moment.
Author's Response: I'm glad that didn't feel too shoehorned in. I was worried!
Date: March 27, 2018 06:29 am Title: In Which a Dessert is Almost, But Not Quite, Eaten
Okay. You already know that I love the callbacks to the show that you’ve been putting in. Laverne’s Pies, Tires Fixed Also showing up in this chapter is amazing.
But I am in absolute amazement at the “that mixed berry yogurt you’re about to eat had expired” moment that you’ve put in. It’s amazing. You’re amazing. This story is amazing. Definitely one of my favorite things I’ve read on this website if not in the larger FF world in general, and even then. I am in love with this version of these characters!
Author's Response: :). I have been working towards that one for several chapters so I'm really glad it worked for you.