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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2020 03:26 pm Title: In Which Another Party Is Considered

Again, I really like what you’re doing with Roy in this story in giving us multiple perspectives – and in this chapter, again a relatively objective perspective. While not ignoring his complacency and lack of consideration for Pam, you’re mainly centering him as a fool who doesn’t quite understand the world around him and the consequences of what he’s doing, someone who isn’t paying enough attention, rather than a bad guy who just doesn’t give a damn about those consequences. Makes it a more interesting story, and makes Pam’s continued attachment to him make more emotional sense.

Author's Response: This might be my most sympathetic Roy, now that you mention it. Because yes, I think here he's more misguided and missing the point and less virulent. 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2018 01:42 pm Title: In Which Another Party Is Considered

Excellent as always. I’m guilty of always kind of forgetting about Roy or making him just be this terrible person (because I’d rather Pam and Jim be together) when really he’s just a guy and has his own emotions/feelings/thoughts/etc. Of course he has his flaws and he could have been better, but the same could be said for all of us. Anyway all of that to say that I appreciate seeing Roy’s perspective and I think you did a great job with writing him.

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it, because I'm not a Roy fan, so it's really valuable to get feedback on that element of the story.

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