Reviews For Terra Incognita
You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: late2theprty Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 28, 2019 12:03 pm Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

Just finished reading this for the second time. So well done. It just amazes me the creativity that you throw into the AU for this storyline.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing it, and I'm always delighted to hear from people who read it (and especially who read it more than once; I'm flattered!). 

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2018 01:18 pm Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

Love this! Keep it up. The daily updates are great.

Author's Response: Thanks! I try very hard to keep to a fast update schedule  (though of course as I say that I'm probably going to miss this weekend before updates resume).

Reviewer: Rach3l Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2018 03:01 pm Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

I love it! Really glad to see someone tackling this topic from the opposite perspective. And I love the twist that puts Jim's parents out of the country.

P.S. If we don't find out what happened to him in the next chapter I will be very sad!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I really like limiting the characters I have to write, so that was a self-serving choice there ;).

 P.S. We'll get more detail going forward, but I do hope chapter 2 kept you from being very sad. 

Reviewer: ftmill16 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 11:35 am Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

OK wow!!! I'm REALLY excited about this one. I really enjoy these hospital stories like Cardiac Care and The Waiting plus Pacific and a few others. You write so well and have such a great imagination I seriously cannot wait to see where you'll take us with this. You have a really great start here. I always feel like in the first chapter it's so important to catch the reader's attention and get them pumped up and excited for the rest of the story right off and you did that. I was worried as the chapter was winding down that you were going to end it without anything about Jim in it and was relieved and excited about the phone call. I'm so glad that Larissa is calling Pam and can't wait for Larissa to hear that Anderson isn't going to happen. Of course im MUCH more excited for Jim to find that out.

I have to say, often when a story that excites me gets started my excitement gets pushed down a lot because so many stories happen so slowly or have an exciting chapter or two then stop. You have a wonderful, amazing history with seeing all your stories all the way through and manybe more exciting, updating quickly. I cannot thank you enough for these things. SO, now I'll sit back, try to be patient and settle in for another wonderful story experience from you! CAN'T WAIT!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your encouraging comments! I'll do my best to keep both the quality and the pace of updates on this up.

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 06:14 am Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

I don’t know what it says about me that I love a good angsty hospital story, but I am already here for this. Big time.

I think you nailed what Pam would have been feeling that day but I especially love that you have her a feeling a bit of anger toward Jim for bolting the way he did. And that cliffhanger, well, that was just rude.

I can’t wait to see what Larissa has to say!

Author's Response: Thanks! I look forward to hearing what you think of my Larissa (and the story as it goes forward). 

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 05:32 am Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

OH yes. Hospital Jam. You are my hero. And, knowing how great your stories typically are, I have no doubt that this will be amazing. Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response: You have your own Hospital JAM fic I love, you know ;). Thanks!

Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2018 01:01 am Title: June 10: Pam's Apartment

Well I already love it and can't wait for more! You capture everything I imagine Pam was feeling on June 10, a mix of frustration and anger with sadness and fear. And I love that you're taking on a hospital story! My only complaint is the cliffhanger you left us on here! ;-)

Author's Response:

Sorry about the cliffhanger, but I assure you we will move on quickly ;). Thanks for this, and I hope you enjoy the story that comes out of it.

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans